From Dq5r
--- 1400.txt 2009-07-02 08:44:18.000000000 -0400
+++ 1400.txt 2009-07-03 15:18:37.000000000 -0400
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
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//@男@＊「これ以上は 進めそうに
// ねえな……。<end>
-@男@＊: Everyfin else 'as already been pilfered...<end>
+@男@＊: Looks like I can't continue on from 'ere, 'ight...<end>
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//@男@＊「なんと この あれた塔を
@@ -37,18 +37,18 @@
//@男@＊「もし それでも 行きたいと
// 言うなら そこの マグマの杖を
// 持ってゆくがよい。<end>
-@男@＊: If your heart is set on going, then you'd better take the Magma Staff over there.<end>
+@男@＊: If you want to go anyway, then I tell you, you'd better take that magma staff.<end>
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//@男@＊「その杖を 使えば
// 洞くつを ふさぐ岩をも
// とかすことが できようぞ！<end>
-@男@＊: If you use that staff, then you can melt the rocks that block the cavernous path!<end>
+@男@＊: If you use that staff, then you will be able to melt rocks that block the cavern!<end>
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//使用者○は マグマの杖を
//天に かざした！<end>
-使用者○ raised the Magma Staff to the sky!<end>
+使用者○ raised the magma staff to the sky!<end>
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//@男@＊「わー 助けてくれー！
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
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//@先@は ポイントを
//切りかえるのを やめた。<end>
-@先@ stopped pulling the switch.<end>
+@先@ took their hands off of the switch.<end>
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//ポイントは こわれている。<end>
@@ -104,12 +104,11 @@
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//@男@＊「あっ 申しおくれました。
// 私は プサン。<end>
-@男@＊: Ah, I'm sorry. I'm Pusan.<end>
+@男@＊: Oh, pardon me. I'm Pusan.<end>
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//@男@プサン「信じられないでしょうが
// かつて 天空の民だった者です。<end>
-//note: DW = Zenithian, DQ = Heaven Folk
@男@Pusan: You probably won't believe it, but I once lived among the [Heaven-folk:Zenithians].<end>
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@@ -132,8 +131,7 @@
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//天空人プサンが 仲間に
//くわわった！<end>
-//note:
-[Heaven-folk:Zenithian] Pusan joined!<end>
+Pusan the [Heaven-folk:Zenithian] joins!<end>
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//@男@プサン「では まいりましょうか。<end>
@@ -144,7 +142,7 @@
// ミルドラースが 神に近づくために
// 建てた神殿か……<end>
//Note: Dirtying it up some due to the convict uniform.
-@男@＊: Might these be the ruins of a temple Mildrath built long ago ta slither a lil' closer to God..?<end>
+@男@＊: Might these be ruins of a temple that meddlin' Mildrath built long ago to become nearer to God..?<end>
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//@男@＊「あるいは 神が 心正しき者を
@@ -156,12 +154,12 @@
//@男@＊「多くの学者が ワシのような者を
// つかって 発掘を 続けさせた
// ものだが……。<end>
-@男@＊: Many a scholar used those such as meself ta excavate these bloody ruins, but...<end>
+@男@＊: Many a scholar used those such as m'self ta excavate 'em, but...<end>
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//@男@＊「本当のところは 誰にも
// 分からんかった。<end>
-@男@＊: Nobody's got a clue where the real location is.<end>
+@男@＊: Nobody's gotta clue where the real place is.<end>
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//@男@＊「……あるいは 真実をさぐる勇気が
@@ -172,7 +170,7 @@
//@男@プサン「いやー ひどいもんですね。
// 湖に沈んだだけあって
// 城中 水びたしみたいですよ。<end>
-@男@Pusan: Wow, what a terrible thing. It looks like it sunk into the lake and was completely submerged.<end>
+@男@Pusan: Wow, what a terrible fate. It looks like it sunk into the lake and was completely submerged.<end>
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//@男@プサン「でも この城が なぜ
@@ -183,23 +181,24 @@
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//@男@プサン「やはり ここにも
// 誰も いないようですね。<end>
-@男@Pusan: I knew that there wouldn't be anyone here, either.<end>
+@男@Pusan: It really does appear that nobody's here either.<end>
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//@男@プサン「あっ そうそう。
// たしか 玉座の後ろに ヒミツの
// 階段が あったはずですが……。<end>
-@男@Pusan: Ah, right, right. There should be a secret staircase behind the throne, so...<end>
+@男@Pusan: Oh, right, right. There should be a secret staircase behind the throne, but...<end>
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//@男@プサン「やや！ これは いったい！<end>
-@男@Pusan: What! What in the!<end>
+//note: needs expansion from original for meaning in english
+@男@Pusan: Whoa! What the heck happened here!?<end>
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//@男@プサン「ここに あったはずの
// ゴールドオーブが なくなって
// いるでは ありませんか！<end>
-@男@Pusan: The Gold Orb that ought to be here! It couldn't have disappeared!<end>
+@男@Pusan: The gold orb that ought to be here! It couldn't have disappeared!<end>
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//@男@プサン「むっ！ この穴は……。<end>
@@ -216,7 +215,7 @@
//@男@プサン「そうか……。
// ゴールドオーブは
// この穴から……。<end>
-@男@Pusan: I see... the Gold Orb... from this hole...<end>
+@男@Pusan: I see... the gold orb... fell from this hole...<end>
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//@男@プサン「そして 残りのオーブひとつでは
@@ -234,7 +233,7 @@
//@男@プサン「しかし ゴールドオーブは
// いったい どこに
// 行ったのでしょうか……。<end>
-@男@Pusan: But just where could the Gold Orb have ended up..?<end>
+@男@Pusan: But just where could the gold orb have ended up..?<end>
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//@男@プサン「さいわい この台には まだ
@@ -246,7 +245,7 @@
//@男@プサン「そのオーラを追って
// ゴールドオーブのゆくえを
// めいそう してみましょう。<end>
-@男@Pusan: We should be able to follow that aura and find the Gold Orb's location.<end>
+@男@Pusan: We should be able to follow that aura and find the gold orb's location.<end>
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//プサンは 目をとじて
@@ -257,17 +256,18 @@
//@男@プサン「なんということでしょう！
// オーブは すでに こわされて
// いたようです！<end>
-@男@Pusan: What has happened?! The orb is already broken!<end>
+@男@Pusan: What a disaster! The orb appears to have already been destroyed!<end>
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//@男@プサン「もはや この城は
// ２度と 天空には……。<end>
-@男@Pusan: Soon, this castle will fall a second time...<end>
+//note: optionally add [Heaven:Zenithia]
+@男@Pusan: Now this castle won't ascend a second time to...<end>
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//@男@プサン「いや！
// ちょっと まってください！<end>
-@男@Pusan: No! Please wait a minute!<end>
+@男@Pusan: No! Just a hold on a moment, please!<end>
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//@男@プサン「たしか 伝説では
@@ -350,35 +350,35 @@
//@男@＊「あんた 知っとるかね？
// 昔 ヘンリーさまと いっしょに
// ニセ太后を退治した男のことじゃ。<end>
-@男@＊: Hey, do you know about the bloke who defeated the Queen Mother's impostor, along with Sir Henry long ago?<end>
+@男@＊: Do you know him, I wonder?<arrow>@男@＊: The man who defeated the Queen Mother impostor together with Prince Henry long ago?<end>
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//@男@＊「なんと！ あの方は
// グランバニアの王子さま
// だったんじゃと！<end>
-@男@＊: Wow! That man was Granvania's Prince!<end>
+@男@＊: What!? That man turned out to be Granvania's prince!?<end>
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//@男@＊「でもな 王になられたとたん
// 行方不明に なったとかで……。<end>
-@男@＊: However, after becoming king, he disappeared...<end>
+@男@＊: But y'know, he vanished right after he was made king...<end>
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//@男@＊「この国にも 王をさがすため
// グランバニアの兵士たちが
// たずねてきたりも したんじゃぞ。<end>
-@男@＊: Granvanian soldiers are also in this country looking for their king.<end>
+@男@＊: Granvanian soldiers are also in this country looking for him.<end>
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//@男@＊「そういえば あんた
// あの男に よう似とるのう。<end>
-@男@＊: You look like that man.<end>
+@男@＊: Speaking of which, you resemble him.<end>
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//@男@＊「まったく コリンズ王子の
// わんぱくぶりには
// あきれてしまうのう。<end>
-@男@＊: It must be that rapscallion Prince Collins.<end>
+@男@＊: Geez, I am appalled at Prince Collins' naughty manners.<end>
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//@低@＊「……し しまった！
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@
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//@低@＊「くっ くそー！
// おぼえてやがれ！！<end>
-@低@＊: Sh-Shite! I'll remember this!!<end>
+@低@＊: Sh-Shit! I'll remember this!!<end>
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//@男@＊「なんでも ここから はるか西
@@ -419,28 +419,28 @@
//@男@＊「……はっ？ あ あなたは
// たしか ヘンリーさまの
// お友だちの @主@さま！<end>
-@男@＊: Hmm? You must be Lord Henry's friend, King @主@!<end>
+@男@＊: ...Huh? Y-You must be Prince Henre's friend, King @主@!<end>
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//@男@＊「どうぞ お通りください！<end>
-@男@＊: Please, you are free to pass!<end>
+@男@＊: Please, you may by all means pass through!<end>
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//@女@＊「このところ なぜか
// 胸さわぎがして なりません。<end>
-@女@＊: Why is my heart in chaos in this wonderful place?<end>
+@女@＊: Just why is my heart unsettled in the world today?<end>
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//@女@＊「とてつもなく巨大な 悪意が
// 世界を おおい始めているように
// 感じられるのです。<end>
-@女@＊: I can feel a great evil beginning to encroach upon the world.<end>
+@女@＊: I seem to sense that an unbelievably great evil is encroaching upon the world.<end>
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//@男@＊「コリンズ王子の いたずらには
// ヘンリーさまも
// 手を やいてるみたいだね。<end>
-@男@＊: Lord Henry also does not know what to do regarding Prince Collins' pranks.<end>
+@男@＊: Prince Henry also does not know what to do regarding Prince Collins' pranks.<end>
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//@女@＊「あたしは
@@ -460,36 +460,37 @@
//@男@＊「人が ネズミをきらいなのを
// 知ってて 頭に ネズミを
// のせるんだよ。 まいるよなあ。<end>
-@男@＊: If he knows that you hate rats, then he'll put a rat on your head. Thank goodness.<end>
+@男@＊: If he knows that you hate rats, then he'll put a rat on your head. It's so annoying.<end>
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//@男@＊「はるか昔…… 勇気ある王が
// 戦いのとき 身につけたマントが
// 今も どこかに残されているらしい。<end>
-@男@＊: The cape that a courageous king once wore long, long ago supposedly still exists somewhere.<end>
+@男@＊: Long, long ago... it's said that a cape worn by a courageous king in battle still exists somewhere even today.<end>
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//@男@＊「すぐれた防具は すぐれた者が
// 身につけてこそ
// 真の力を 出しうるもの。<end>
-@男@＊: Excellent equipment can only show its true worth when donned by an excellent person.<end>
+//note: 者: generic term for person or 'one(s)'
+@男@＊: Exceptional armor can only show its true power when donned by an exceptional man.<end>
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//@男@＊「@主@さまが グランバニアの
// 王に なられたという話は
// すでに 聞きおよんでいまする。<end>
-@男@＊: I have already heard Lord @主@, that you have been crowned King of Granvania.<end>
+@男@＊: I have heard talk that you were crowned Granvania's king, King @主@.<end>
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//@男@＊「@主@王になら きっと
// つかいこなせるはず！<end>
-@男@＊: I am sure, King @主@, that you are fit to wear it!<end>
+@男@＊: Certainly you should be able to wear it, King @主@!<end>
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//@男@＊「あ〜あ おでこにタンコブが。
// まったく コリンズ王子には
// 泣かされてしまいます。<end>
-@男@＊: Ahh, I bumped my head. I bet Prince Collins is bowled over in tears.<end>
+@男@＊: Ohh~ This bump on my head. Geez, Prince Collins is going to make me cry.<end>
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//@低@＊「デール王は この国で 再び
@@ -501,28 +502,28 @@
//@低@＊「そうすれば 次の国王は
// ヘンリーさまの ひとり息子
// コリンズ王子に決まりだからな。<end>
-@低@＊: If that happens, the next king will be Lord Henry's only son, Prince Collins.<end>
+@低@＊: If that happens, the next king will be Prince Henry's only son, Prince Collins.<end>
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//@男@＊「ラインハットへ ようこそ！
// こちらに おわすのが
// デール王で ございます。<end>
-@男@＊: Welcome to Reinhart! The one who sits upon the throne before you is King Dale.<end>
+@男@＊: Welcome to Reinhart! That who sits before you is his eminence, King Dale.<end>
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//@男@デール「あ あなたは……！<end>
-@男@Dale: Oh, can it be? I-It's you..!<end>
+@男@Dale: Y-You..!<end>
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//@男@デール「@主@さん
// いえ @主@王！<end>
-@男@Dale: @主@, no King @主@!<end>
+@男@Dale: @主@, no, King @主@!<end>
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//@男@デール「@主@王が
// 行方不明になった時は
// 本当に 心配しましたよ。<end>
-@男@Dale: I was so worried when you disappeared.<end>
+@男@Dale: I was really worried when you disappeared.<end>
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//@男@デール「でも グランバニアに
@@ -544,12 +545,12 @@
//@男@＊「@主@さまの おかげで
// ヘンリーさまも 奥さまも
// 幸せに お暮らしです。<end>
-@男@＊: Thanks to @主@, Lord Henry and his wife can live in happiness.<end>
+@男@＊: Thanks to you, King @主@, Prince Henry and his wife may live in harmony.<end>
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//@女@＊「んっ！
// 誰だ おまえはっ！？<end>
-@女@＊: Hmm! Who are you!?<end>
+@女@＊: Hmm! Who're you!?<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「こら！ コリンズ！
@@ -565,7 +566,7 @@
//@男@ヘンリー「いや 申しわけない。
// 私の息子が 失礼を……。
// ん？ ……あっ！<end>
-@男@Henry: I'm terribly sorry for my son's rudeness... Huh? ...Aah!<end>
+@男@Henry: I'm terribly sorry for my son's rudeness... Huh? ...Oh!<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「よおー！ @主@！！
@@ -587,7 +588,7 @@
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//@男@ヘンリー「まったく おまえは
// 苦労ばっかり するヤツだよ。<end>
-@男@Henry: You're the kind of guy that just finds trouble everywhere he goes.<end>
+@男@Henry: Geez, you're a guy that just gets into trouble wherever you go.<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「でも まあ こうして
@@ -597,7 +598,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=146D
//@男@ヘンリー「……あ そう そう
// オレ 子どもが できたんだよ。<end>
-@男@Henry: ...Oh right, right. Look, I had a child.<end>
+@男@Henry: ...Oh, right, right. I have a son.<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「息子の コリンズだ。<end>
@@ -611,19 +612,18 @@
//@男@ヘンリー「コラ！
// ちゃんと あいさつ しないか！
// ポカリ！<end>
-//note: fixme last line
-@男@Henry: Hey! Aren't you going to properly address him?!?<end>
+@男@Henry: HEY! Aren't you going to properly greet him!?<arrow>Henry smacks Collins on the head.<end>
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//@女@コリンズ「あ いてっ！
// は はじめまして……。<end>
-@女@Collins: Owww, that hurts! H-How do you do...<end>
+@女@Collins: Ah, ow! H-How do you do..?<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「いやー 悪い 悪い。
// どうも わんぱくでさー。<end>
-//Note: It was a little too modern.
-@男@Henry: No, so sorry. It's quite alright. I apologize for his rudeness.<end>
+//note: used rapscallion from an earlier line's revision
+@男@Henry: Well, so sorry, so sorry. He's a little rapscallion.<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「ところで
@@ -650,23 +650,23 @@
//@男@ヘンリー「ん？ おお その子か！
// へえー やっぱり 昔の
// おまえに 似てるなあ。<end>
-@男@Henry: Hmm? Oh, that child! Wow, he's nearly the spitting image of his father.<end>
+@男@Henry: Hmm? Oh, that boy!? Wow, he really is the spitting image of you long ago.<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「あ そうだ！ 子どもは
// 子どもどうし。 コリンズに
// 城の中を 案内させよう。<end>
-@男@Henry: Oh right! Children are children. What say Collins gives you a tour of the castle.<end>
+@男@Henry: Oh, that's right! Children should play with children. Collins, go give them a tour of the castle.<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「コリンズ。
// 城の中を いろいろ
// 見せてあげなさい。<end>
-@男@Henry: Collins, please show our guests around our lovely home.<end>
+@男@Henry: Collins. Show our guests around the castle.<end>
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//@女@コリンズ「はーい。<end>
-@女@Collins: Feh. Yeah, whatever...<end>
+@女@Collins: Yeeeeeees.<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「やれやれ。
@@ -779,12 +779,12 @@
//@男@＊「これは @主@王さま。
// お子さまは まだ お城の中に
// いらっしゃいます。<end>
-@男@＊: King @主@. The princes are still inside the castle.<end>
+@男@＊: You are King @主@. Your children are still inside the castle.<end>
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//@男@＊「どうぞ お連れになって
// 出かけられますように。<end>
-@男@＊: Please, to go this way, you must be accompanied.<end>
+@男@＊: Please make sure that you take them with you when you leave.<end>
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//@女@@子@「お父さん
@@ -824,16 +824,16 @@
//@女@コリンズ「ふん わるかったな。
// オヤジが あやまれっていうから
// いいものを やろう。<end>
-@女@Collins: Hmph, I understand. I'll give you something good since I put him through such a bother.<end>
+@女@Collins: Hmph, I understand. I'll give you something nice since my pops told me to apologize.<end>
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//@主@は 風のぼうしを
//受けとった！<end>
-@主@ took the Wind Hat!<end>
+@主@ took the wind hat!<end>
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//@女@コリンズ「大切に つかえよ。<end>
-@女@Collins: Use it well.<end>
+@女@Collins: Take good care of it.<end>
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//@女@コリンズ「ふん なんだよう？
@@ -855,7 +855,7 @@
//@男@ヘンリー「だから せめて
// そのときに作った
// 記念品を もっていってくれよ。<end>
-@男@Henry: Because of that, please at least take this memento made from my father's reign.<end>
+@男@Henry: So at least please take this memento that was made back then.<end>
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//@男@ヘンリー「昔の オレの部屋
@@ -913,7 +913,7 @@
//@女@@娘@「子分のしるしを とって来いって
// 言うから 宝箱を開けたら
// そのうちに どこかに行っちゃって。<end>
-@女@@娘@: He told me to bring back the follower's seal, so I opened the chest, but he ran off somewhere.<end>
+@女@@娘@: He told me to bring back the lackey's badge, so I opened the chest, but he ran off somewhere.<end>
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//@女@@娘@「ねえ お父さんも
@@ -933,18 +933,18 @@
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//@男@＊「やや あなたは たしか
// ヘンリーさまの お友だちの方！<end>
-@男@＊: Hey, you must be Lord Henry's friend!<end>
+@男@＊: Hey, you must be Prince Henry's friend!<end>
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//@男@＊「いや〜 おなつかしゅう
// ございます。<end>
-@男@＊: Wowww, now this brings back some memories.<end>
+@男@＊: Well~ you sure bring back some good memories.<end>
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//@男@＊「しかし ふしぎですな。
// あれから だいぶたつのに
// あなたは まったく昔のままだ。<end>
-@男@＊: However, it is strange. Although considerable time has passed, you continue to be completely of times past.<end>
+@男@＊: But it sure is strange. Even though it's been so long, you're just as you were from way back when.<end>
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//@男@＊「あたしの弟は 昔
@@ -965,12 +965,12 @@
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//@男@＊「特等の景品は たしか
// ゴールドカードだったのう。<end>
-@男@＊: The premium gift was probably the Gold Card.<end>
+@男@＊: I'm sure that the top prize was the gold card.<end>
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//@男@＊「あ！ あんた！
// いつか どこかで会ったよね！<end>
-@男@＊: Ah! You! We've met somewhere before!<end>
+@男@＊: Ah! You! We've met somewhere before, haven't we!<end>
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//@男@＊「う うちの人が うちの人が
@@ -1009,7 +1009,8 @@
//@女@＊「どこかの すごろく場では
// セレブリティパス っていう すごい
// パスカードが もらえるんだって。<end>
-@女@＊: At some [Sugoroku:Parcheesi] place, you can get an amazing pass card called a Celebrity Pass.<end>
+//note: she does not say celebrity pass here
+@女@＊: It's said that there's a [sugoroku board:parcheesi track] somewhere where you can receive an amazing pass card.<end>
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//@男@＊「昔 うちの店が
@@ -1021,7 +1022,7 @@
//@男@＊「でもね 元気に育ってゆく
// 娘を見てると なんだか
// 希望が わいてきてさ。<end>
-@男@＊: But, when I look at my daughter, who grew up well, I somehow have hope.<end>
+@男@＊: But, when I look at my daughter, who grew up healthy, I somehow have hope.<end>
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//@男@＊「まあ 人生も なかなか
@@ -1069,7 +1070,7 @@
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//@男@＊「まあ オレなら 自分の身は
// 自分で守るがね。<end>
-@男@＊: I have to look out for myself now, don't you think?<end>
+@男@＊: Well, to me, I'd protect myself with my own hands, y'know?<end>
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//@男@＊「こいつ エラそうなことを
@@ -1116,12 +1117,12 @@
//@女@＊「その人たちは 魔物たちとも
// 心を通じることができた と
// いわれています。<end>
-@女@＊: It is said that those people can feel the hearts of demons too.<end>
+@女@＊: It's said that those people can sense the hearts of even monsters.<end>
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//@男@＊「世界が あぶないとか
// いやなウワサもあるけど……。<end>
-@男@＊: There's a horrible rumor that the world is in danger, but...<end>
+@男@＊: There's also a horrible rumor that the world is in danger, but...<end>
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//@男@＊「あたしに できるのは
@@ -1139,7 +1140,7 @@
//@男@＊「まったく こんな収入じゃ
// 光の教団への 寄付金なんて
// 払えやしないわ。 ブツブツ……。<end>
-@男@＊: To donate our complete earnings to the Followers of Light, money which is not even in our hands to give. *grumbling*...<end>
+@男@＊: Geez, I'm not gonna pay my hard-earned income for some donation to the Followers of Light. *grumble*...<end>
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//@男@＊「あら ステキな お客さん！
@@ -1184,19 +1185,19 @@
//@低@＊「しかし 天空の武器防具を 身につけた
// 勇者がな そのエスなんたらをたおし
// 世界を救ったっちゅうことだ。<end>
-//note: is Es. monster correct?
-@低@＊: However the hero donning the [Heavenly:Zenithian] armaments defeated that Es. monster and saved the world.<end>
+//note: Es is correct, he abbreviates the name of Esturk, but not monster
+@低@＊: However, the hero donning the [Heavenly:Zenithian] armaments defeated "Es" and saved the world.<end>
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//@男@＊「ふー 酒がうまい！
// 若い女の子がいれば
// もっと うまいのだが……。<end>
-@男@＊: Whoa, this liquor is good! It'd be even better if there were some young girls around here...<end>
+@男@＊: Phew, this is nice liquor! It'd be even nicer if I had some young girl around though...<end>
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//@男@ソフィア「まあ お客さまなんて
// 何年ぶりかしら……。<end>
-@男@Sophia: I wonder how many years it's been since I've had customers now...<end>
+@男@Sophia: Oh my, I wonder how many years since we've had visitors..?<end>
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//@男@ソフィア「ここは 夫と 私だけの
@@ -1317,7 +1318,7 @@
//@男@エリック「なんと 死んでいるせいか
// 味が しないのだよ。
// いやはや 残念じゃのう……。<end>
-@男@Eric: I don't have the taste for it probably because Sophia is dying. It's really a shame...<end>
+@男@Eric: I don't have the taste for it probably due being dead. It's really a shame...<end>
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//@男@＊「ベネットじいさんの家から
@@ -1329,7 +1330,7 @@
//@男@＊「いいトシして 朝から晩まで
// 研究 研究って
// ムリを しすぎたんだよ。<end>
-@男@＊: He should know that he's doing too much research from morning to night.<end>
+@男@＊: He works too hard at his age with all his research and research from dawn 'til dusk.<end>
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//@男@＊「あんた 知ってるかい？
@@ -1406,8 +1407,7 @@
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//@男@＊「まいった！
// また道に 迷ったようだ。<end>
-//Note: Changed this because it read like the lost Rurafen knight is describing what he's going to say next.
-@男@＊: I'm beaten! I'm totally lost as to which road to take.<end>
+@男@＊: Darn it! I seem to have lost my way again.<end>
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//@男@＊「この町は
@@ -1433,13 +1433,13 @@
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//@男@＊「や やっぱり
// 都会の宿屋は ちがうだな。<end>
-@男@＊: A city inn shooooore is diff'rnt.<end>
+@男@＊: A... A citah inn shor' is diff'rnt.<end>
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//@男@＊「コラ！ あんまり
// キョロキョロすんでねえ！
// いなか者だと思われるだよ。<end>
-@男@＊: Hey, now! Don't be one-a them looky-loos! You'll make everyone think we're some kinda rubes.<end>
+@男@＊: HEY! Doncha' go gawkin' 'bout so much! Everyone'll think we're country folk.<end>
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//@男@＊「今も まだ あるのかは
@@ -1450,27 +1450,27 @@
//@男@＊「なんですって！？
// もう ルラフェンの地酒を
// もっていると！？<end>
-@男@＊: What did you say!? You've already got Zoomfen's liquor!?<end>
+@男@＊: What'd you say!? You've already gotten some of [Zoomfen:Returndia]'s local liquor!?<end>
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//@男@＊「そうですか。
// ベネットじいさんから……。<end>
-@男@＊: I see. From ol' Bennett...<end>
+@男@＊: Is that how? You got it from ol' Bennett...<end>
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//@男@＊「じいさんから 事情は
// 聞いていると 思いますが……<end>
-@男@＊: I was thinking of asking about information from the old man, but...<end>
+@男@＊: I think you must've heard all about it from that old man, but...<end>
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//@男@＊「くれぐれも 他の人には
// ないしょに しておいて下さいね。<end>
-@男@＊: Take care and please keep this secret from others.<end>
+@男@＊: Please take good care to keep this secret from others.<end>
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//@男@＊「やれやれ うちの息子にも
// こまったものだわ。<end>
-@男@＊: *sigh* My son is also quite a problem.<end>
+@男@＊: Oh my, my son seems to be quite troublesome.<end>
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//@男@＊「この様子じゃ
@@ -1481,40 +1481,38 @@
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//@男@＊「さいきん ちょっと
// 太りぎみ なんだけど……<end>
-@男@＊: Recently she's gotten a bit fat, too...<end>
+@男@＊: Recently, I've gotten a bit fat, but...<end>
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//@男@＊「近ごろ 闇のチカラが
// 少しずつ 大きくなって
// ゆくのを 感じます。<end>
-@男@＊: I sense that the power of the Darkness is slowly growing bigger recently.<end>
+@男@＊: I feel that recently the power of darkness has slowly grown larger.<end>
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//@男@＊「世界のどこかに あるという
// 魔界への扉……。<end>
-@男@＊: There's a door to the Underworld that is said to exist somewhere in this world...<end>
+@男@＊: Somewhere in this world there's a so-called "door to the Demon World"...<end>
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//@男@＊「魔王ミルドラースが その扉を
// うちやぶるか それとも 勇者さまが
// 扉の向こうの世界へ 行かれるか……<end>
-//note: i cut out most of the third line due to space
-//note: fixme
-@男@＊: Will the Demonlord Mildrath break down that door, or will the hero be able to get to it first..?<end>
+@男@＊: Will the Demonlord Mildrath break down that door,<arrow>@男@＊: or will the Hero be able to reach the world on the other side..?<end>
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//@男@＊「あとは 時間との たたかいに
// なるでしょう。<end>
-@男@＊: Only time will tell the results of the battle.<end>
+@男@＊: What's left is a race against time.<end>
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//@女@＊「わーい わーい！<end>
-@女@＊: Vrrrrooooommmm!<end>
+@女@＊: Whee! Whee!<end>
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//@男@＊「あー もう
// 待ちなさいったら！<end>
-@男@＊: Ahh, I told you to wait!<end>
+@男@＊: Ahh, I told you to wait already!<end>
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//@男@＊「教会の中で あばれたりしちゃ
@@ -1525,8 +1523,8 @@
//@男@＊「トテカン トテカン……と
// 防具は じょうぶに
// 作らないとな。<end>
-//note: fixme: onomonotopeia.. "totekan" "tokoton" perversion? FIXME...
-@男@＊: ...or I won't be able to make strong armor.<end>
+//note: keep the rhyming
+@男@＊: Hamm'or, hamm'or... or I won't be able to make strong arm'or.<end>
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//@男@ベネット「ゴホン ゴホン！
@@ -1601,13 +1599,12 @@
//@男@ベネット「ゴホン ゴホン！
// わしは お前さんたちが
// 何者か 分かるつもりじゃ。<end>
-//Note: This line and the next could use a redo.
-@男@Bennett: *cough* *cough*! I want to understand what you people are.<end>
+@男@Bennett: *cough* *cough*! I'd like to know just who you people are.<end>
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//@男@ベネット「だてに 古代の研究を
// やっとらんからな。<end>
-@男@Bennett: I mean, you're able to do ancient research.<end>
+@男@Bennett: I mean, 'cause I've come all this way with my research of ancient times.<end>
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//@男@ベネット「わしの研究が
@@ -1625,30 +1622,29 @@
//@女@＊「ベネットじいさんの 庭が
// けむく なくなったのは
// いいんにゃけど……。<end>
-@女@＊: It's good that the smoke coming from ol' Bennett's garden is gone but...<end>
+@女@＊: It's nice that ol' Bennett's garden isn't smokey, but meow...<end>
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//@女@＊「寝こんでる じいさんを
// 見ると 心配になって
// 庭に いづらいんにゃ。<end>
-@女@＊: When I look at that sleeping old man I worry, and don't want to be in the garden.<end>
+@女@＊: I'm worried when I see that old man sleeping, and it's tough to take a cat nap in the garden, meow.<end>
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//@女@＊「でも あんたに
// 話を聞いてもらって
// 少し 気がほぐれたにゃん。<end>
-@女@＊: But, I feel a little better having talked to you.<end>
+@女@＊: But, having you listen to my story makes me relax a bit, meow.<end>
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//@男@＊「こうして 彼女と
// いっしょにいれば イヤな事も
// ふっとんじゃいますよ。<end>
-@男@＊: If I'm able to live with a girl like this, then these trying times don't feel so bad.<end>
+@男@＊: Living together with my girlfriend like this, these trying times don't feel so bad.<end>
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//@男@＊「愛してるんだなあ……。<end>
-//note: I think I'm in love...?
-@男@＊: I'm in love...<end>
+@男@＊: I really love her...<end>
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//@男@＊「この町は
@@ -1731,14 +1727,14 @@
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//@男@＊「なんだ もう 知ってるのか。
// ビックリさせないでくれよ。<end>
-@男@＊: Oh you already know about that. Don't scare me, then.<end>
+@男@＊: W-hat. So you already know that? Don't scare me, then.<end>
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//@男@＊「うつら うつら……。<end>
//note: fixme: she's going in and out of consciousness,
//@男@ is not displayed, it is a control character.
//＊: needs to be left too to make sure no issues occur
-@男@＊: (The old lady is dozing off and on and off and on...)<end>
+@男@＊: *restless sleeping*<end>
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//@男@＊「ここは 妖精の村に
@@ -1762,19 +1758,19 @@
//@男@＊「私もね 子供のときは
// 妖精の姿を 見たことが
// あったんだけどねえ……。<end>
-@男@＊: Me too. I saw a fairy in my childhood...<end>
+@男@＊: Me too, y'know. I saw fairies in my childhood...<end>
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//@女@@子@「あれ？
// お父さん たき火のところに
// だれか いるよ。<end>
-@女@@子@: Huh? Father, there seems to be someone in the fire.<end>
+@女@@子@: Huh? Father, there seems to be someone by the fire.<end>
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//@女@@娘@「あれ？
// お父さん たき火のところに
// だれか いるわよ。<end>
-@女@@娘@: Huh? Father, there seems to be someone in the fire.<end>
+@女@@娘@: Huh? Father, there seems to be someone by the fire.<end>
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//@女@＊「きゃっ！<end>
@@ -1793,7 +1789,7 @@
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//@女@@子@「うん！
// 見えるよ。<end>
-@女@@子@: Yeah! I can see.<end>
+@女@@子@: Yeah! I can see you.<end>
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//@女@＊「ふ〜ん。
@@ -1823,7 +1819,7 @@
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//@女@＊「まあ あなたたちは
// このまえの……。<end>
-@女@＊: Oh, you guys are the same from...<end>
+@女@＊: Well, you folk are the ones I met before...<end>
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//@女@＊「また ポワンさまに
@@ -1844,7 +1840,7 @@
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//@女@@娘@「うん！
// 見えるよ。<end>
-@女@@娘@: Yeah! I can see.<end>
+@女@@娘@: Yeah! I can see you.<end>
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//@女@@娘@「わたしたち
@@ -1891,7 +1887,7 @@
//@女@＊「えっ？ ゴールドオーブを？
// それなら ポワンさまに
// 聞けば いいと思うわ。<end>
-@女@＊: Hmm? A Gold Orb? If that's the case, I think you'd better talk to Lady Powan.<end>
+@女@＊: Hmm? A gold orb? If that's the case, I think you'd better talk to Lady Powan.<end>
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//@男@ポワン「まあ もしかして
@@ -1918,18 +1914,18 @@
//@男@ポワン「そうですか。
// どうやら 約束を はたす時が
// 来たようですね。<end>
-@男@Powan: I see. It seems that the promised time has come.<end>
+@男@Powan: I see now. It seems that the time has come to fulfill my promise.<end>
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//@男@ポワン「@主@ このホルンを
// 持って行きなさい。<end>
-@男@Powan: @主@, take this horn.<end>
+@男@Powan: @主@, take this horn with you.<end>
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//@男@ポワン「私たち 妖精国の女王が
// きっと チカラに
// なってくれるでしょう。<end>
-@男@Powan: We and the Fairy Kingdom Queen will certainly have the power you need.<end>
+@男@Powan: We're sure that the Fairy Kingdom's Queen must have the power you need.<end>
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//@先@は 妖精のホルンを
@@ -1950,7 +1946,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1563
//@男@ポワン「わたしたちは
// あなたの 味方です。<end>
-@男@Powan: We are your allies.<end>
+@男@Powan: We are your friends.<end>
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//@男@ポワン「こまったときは いつでも
@@ -1986,13 +1982,13 @@
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//@男@ポワン「わたしたちは
// あなたがたの 味方です。<end>
-@男@Powan: We are your allies.<end>
+@男@Powan: We are your friends.<end>
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//@男@ポワン「神の城が ふたたび天にのぼり
// 世界が 平和になることを
// 私たちも 祈っていますわ。<end>
-@男@Powan: We'll also be praying to raise God's Castle to {Heaven:Zenithia] and bring peace to the world.<end>
+@男@Powan: We'll also be praying that you can raise the Lord's castle to [Heaven:Zenithia] and bring peace to the world.<end>
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//@女@ベラ「あなたが @主@だってこと
@@ -2086,7 +2082,7 @@
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//@女@ルナ「まあ 妖精の羽ペンが
// 必要なのですね。<end>
-@女@Luna: Ah, the Fairy Quill is required.<end>
+@女@Luna: Well then, the fairy quill is important for that.<end>
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//@女@ルナ「よろしいですわ。
@@ -2119,25 +2115,22 @@
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//@女@＊「ザイルのじいちゃん
// 病気で 死んじゃったんだよ。<end>
-@女@＊: Grandpa Zaile died of illness.<end>
+@女@＊: Zaile's grandpa died of an illness.<end>
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//@女@＊「ザイルが 心配ばっかり
// かけたから じゃないかなあ……。<end>
-//note: Egad...this one's a little awkward. I wouldn't mind another set of eyes on this sucker.
-//Note: Second on this. This is the slime in Zaile's room. You either get him or you don't. Google translates this as, "I do not because I just worry about the rope."
-@女@＊: Zaile is worried because you only added him temporarily, whether or not you're using him.<end>
+@女@＊: I wonder if it wasn't that he worried about Zaile all of the time.<end>
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//@女@＊「ザイルを 仲間にするなんて
// 物好きな人たちだね。<end>
-//note: i.e. join the party
-@女@＊: Only greatly liked people can ask Zaile to be their ally.<end>
+@女@＊: Only those who Zaile is curious about may have him join their party.<end>
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//@女@＊「でも ザイルのじいちゃんは
// きっと よろこんでると思うよ。<end>
-@女@＊: But, I think Grandpa Zaile will certainly be overjoyed.<end>
+@女@＊: But I think that Zaile's grandpa will certainly be overjoyed.<end>
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//@男@ザイル「なんだよ お前は？
@@ -2192,7 +2185,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=158F
//ザイルが 仲間に くわわった！<end>
-Zaile joined!<end>
+Zaile joins!<end>
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//ザイルは 不満そうな顔をしつつ
@@ -2209,12 +2202,12 @@
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//@男@ザイル「うん？ なんだ
// @主@一行の お出ましか。<end>
-@男@Zaile: Yeah? You want me in @主@'s line?<end>
+@男@Zaile: Yeah? What. You want me to be apart of @主@'s party or something?<end>
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//@男@ザイル「また 仲間になって オイラに
// かつやく してほしいんだな？<end>
-@男@Zaile: Again, you want me to join you and do things with me?<end>
+@男@Zaile: You wish me to join and make use of MY services again?<end>
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//@低@＊「雪の女王 亡きあと 氷の館も
@@ -2268,17 +2261,17 @@
//@男@＊「どうか まず @主@どのが
// 女王さまに お会いに
// なりますように。<end>
-@男@＊: To pass, first Lord @主@ must meet with the Queen.<end>
+@男@＊: First you must meet with my Queen, honorable @主@.<end>
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//@男@＊「さあ どうぞ お通りください。<end>
-@男@＊: Please, pass this way.<end>
+@男@＊: Well then, please pass by.<end>
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//@女@＊「伝説の勇者さまが ついに
// 誕生したことは 私たちも
// 知っておりました。<end>
-@女@＊: We recently learned the Legendary Hero had been born.<end>
+@女@＊: We recently learned the legendary Hero had been born.<end>
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//@女@＊「どうか @子@さまに
@@ -2411,18 +2404,18 @@
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//@女@＊「この絵は 心をうつし出す
// ふしぎな絵。<end>
-@女@＊: This painting is a mysterious piece that reflects the heart.<end>
+@女@＊: This painting is a mysterious piece that reflects what is in your heart.<end>
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//@女@＊「どうか @主@さま ご自身が
// 女王さまから もらったオーブを
// 持っていらっしゃいますように。<end>
-@女@＊: Please take the orb you personally received from the Queen with you.<end>
+@女@＊: Please take the orb that you received from the Queen with you.<end>
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//@女@＊「あなたを 思い出の場所に
// はこんで くれるでしょう。<end>
-@女@＊: It will take you to a place that you can remember.<end>
+@女@＊: It will transport you to a place in your memories.<end>
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//@女@＊「さあ 絵の前に立ち
@@ -2459,35 +2452,33 @@
//@女@＊「この絵は 最近になって
// マスタードラゴンさまから
// 贈られたものです。<end>
-//note: fixme
-@女@＊: This painting is something which was recently sent to us by the Lord Master Dragon.<end>
+@女@＊: This painting is something which was recently sent to us by Master Dragon.<end>
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//@女@＊「@主@さまが 絵の前に立って
// 心を開けば きっと
// 愛しい人に 会えるでしょう。<end>
-@女@＊: If Lord @主@ stands before the painting and opens his heart, he can meet with the person he loves.<end>
+@女@＊: If you, the honorable @主@, stand before the painting and open your heart, you will certainly meet the person you love.<end>
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//@女@＊「わたし 知ってるよ。<end>
-@女@＊: I know.<end>
+@女@＊: I know it to be true.<end>
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//@女@＊「２階の東の部屋に 飾られる絵は
// ときどき 取りかえられるの。<end>
-@女@＊: The painting hanging in the eastern room on the second floor sometimes recreates itself.<end>
+@女@＊: The painting that's displayed in the eastern room on the second floor is replaced by another from time to time.<end>
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//@女@＊「でも 今のは 伝説の勇者さまの
// お誕生を祝う絵だから 次は
// ずいぶん先に なるかもね。<end>
-//note: connects with the previous line
-@女@＊: It's possible the new Legendary Hero is among us, because it's a painting celebrating his birth.<end>
+@女@＊: But, at the moment it is a painting celebrating the birth of the legendary Hero,<arrow>@女@＊: so it might be quite some time until the next painting.<end>
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//@女@＊「シーッ！
// お静かに……。<end>
-@女@＊: Shhh! Be quiet...<end>
+@女@＊: Shhh! Keep it down...<end>
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//@女@＊「私は 妖精好きの
@@ -2559,17 +2550,17 @@
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//@主@は @主@に
//ゴールドオーブを 手わたした。<end>
-@主@ passed the Gold Orb to @主@.<end>
+@主@ passed the gold orb to @主@.<end>
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//ゴールドオーブと ひかるオーブを
//すりかえますか？<end>
-Switch the Gold Orb with the Glimmering Orb?<end>
+Switch the gold orb with the Glimmering Orb?<end>
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//@主@は ゴールドオーブと
//ひかるオーブを すりかえた！<end>
-@主@ switched the Gold Orb with the Glimmering Orb!<end>
+@主@ switched the gold orb with the Glimmering Orb!<end>
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//@主@は @主@に
@@ -2594,7 +2585,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=15D9
//@主@は @主@に
//ゴールドオーブを かえした。<end>
-@主@ returned the Gold Orb to @主@.<end>
+@主@ returned the gold orb to @主@.<end>
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//@女@@主@「な〜んだ。
@@ -2620,17 +2611,17 @@
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//@男@＊「誰もいないのに どうにも
// 人の気配が するんだ。<end>
-@男@＊: It's worrisome when nobody is around.<end>
+@男@＊: I sense that someone else's presence even though nobody is around.<end>
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//@男@＊「パパスさんとこの @主@が
// 誰かと話してるみたいに
// ひとりごとを 言ってたし……。<end>
-@男@＊: Papas' son @主@ seems to be talking to someone going along talking to himself...<end>
+@男@＊: Papas' son, @主@, seems to be talking to someone going along talking to himself...<end>
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//@男@＊「おかしいなあ……。<end>
-@男@＊: It's strange...<end>
+@男@＊: How funny...<end>
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//@男@＊「ゆうべ 酒場で
@@ -2660,7 +2651,7 @@
//@男@＊「パパスさんも ２年ぶりに
// 帰ってきたと思ったら
// アルカパに 出かけたりして。<end>
-@男@＊: Just as I thought, Papas had just come home after two years, when he up and went to Alcapa.<end>
+@男@＊: Just when I thought Papas had returned home after 2 years, he up and went to Alcapa.<end>
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//@男@＊「ホントに いそがしい人
@@ -2736,13 +2727,13 @@
//@男@パパス「わっはっはっはっ！
// 私の子どもは あとにも 先にも
// @主@１人 だけだ！<end>
-@男@Papas: Wahahaha! My child to me is only @主@!<end>
+@男@Papas: Wahahaha! There is only one child of mine and that's @主@!<end>
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//@男@パパス「なにか ほかに用でも
// あるのかな？<end>
//Note: This is a yes or no question
-@男@Papas: Is there anything I can help you with?<end>
+@男@Papas: I wonder if there's anything else you need?<end>
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//@男@パパス「ふむふむ……。 では
@@ -2781,7 +2772,7 @@
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//@男@パパス「なんだか 言ってることが
// よく分からない人だな。<end>
-@男@Papas: You're a person who doesn't understand well what someone says, are you?<end>
+@男@Papas: Whatever you're babbling on about, I don't really understand you.<end>
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//@男@パパス「では ジャマをしないで
@@ -2837,7 +2828,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1606
//@先@は プサンに
//ゴールドオーブを 手わたした。<end>
-@先@ passed the Gold Orb to Pusan.<end>
+@先@ passed the gold orb to Pusan.<end>
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//@男@プサン「さあ これで いいはずです！
@@ -2853,23 +2844,23 @@
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//@男@プサン「すべては @主@たち
// 皆さんの おかげですね！<end>
-@男@Pusan: This is all possible thanks to @主@ and his colleagues!<end>
+@男@Pusan: This is all possible thanks to you and all of your friends, @主@!<end>
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//@男@プサン「さあ 見ていてください！<end>
-@男@Pusan: Now, please watch!<end>
+@男@Pusan: Now, please look on!<end>
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//@男@プサン「ふむ……。 思ったほど
// 高く あがらなかったみたい
// ですね……。<end>
-@男@Pusan: Hmm, just as I thought, the castle isn't rising high enough to my satisfaction...<end>
+@男@Pusan: Hmm... It seems that it didn't rise as high as I had thought it would...<end>
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//@男@プサン「まあ いいでしょう！
// あとは あなたたちに
// おまかせ します。<end>
-@男@Pusan: Well, not to worry! I'll leave everything else up to you.<end>
+@男@Pusan: Well, that's fine! I'll leave everything else up to you.<end>
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//@男@プサン「水も 引いたみたいだし
@@ -2885,7 +2876,7 @@
//@男@プサン「城の中には
// 水に 閉じこめられてた人々が
// 何人か 生きていたようですね。<end>
-@男@Pusan: How many people were still trapped inside the castle after it was submerged?<end>
+@男@Pusan: It seems that there were many that were trapped in the water inside the castle, doesn't it?<end>
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//@男@プサン「時間を止め
@@ -2998,13 +2989,13 @@
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//@女@＊「なくなったら また ここに
// 取りに 来てくださいね。<end>
-@女@＊: Please return here and take it if you lose it.<end>
+@女@＊: If you happen to lose it, then please come back here and take another one, okay?<end>
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//@男@＊「なんと！ この城が
// 浮上したとっ！？
// それは めでたい！<end>
-@男@＊: What! This castle is floating!? That's cause to celebrate!<end>
+@男@＊: What! This castle has risen!? That's a joyous occasion!<end>
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//@男@＊「あとは 竜の神さま
@@ -3016,7 +3007,7 @@
//@男@＊「マスタードラゴンは テルパドールの
// 西の島 ボブルの塔に その能力を
// 封印したそうじゃ。<end>
-@男@＊: I heard that Master Dragon sealed his power at Boble Tower, on an island west of Telpador.<end>
+@男@＊: I heard that Master Dragon sealed that power in the tower of Boble on an island west of Telpador.<end>
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//@男@＊「そこの タンスの中身を
@@ -3028,12 +3019,12 @@
//@女@＊「世界が まだ平和だった時代
// 下界を見て マスタードラゴンは
// こう おっしゃいました。<end>
-@女@＊: Master Dragon said that we looked over the land-bound ones at an age when the world was still peaceful.<end>
+@女@＊: In an era when the world was still peaceful Master Dragon looked down upon the world and said to us.<end>
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//@女@＊「人間も なかなか
// よいものだな……。<end>
-@女@＊: Humans are also pretty good creatures...<end>
+@女@＊: Humans are also quite good creatures...<end>
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//@女@＊「そして お姿を おかくしに
@@ -3045,19 +3036,18 @@
//@女@＊「ああ！ その後 数百年の間に
// この城が 落ちてしまうなど
// 誰が 思ったでしょうか！<end>
-@女@＊: Ah! Who would have thought, that after hundreds of years, this castle would fall!<end>
+@女@＊: Ohh! After that, in some hundreds of years, who would have thought that this castle would fall!?<end>
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//@女@＊「天空に この城が あるかぎり
// 平和は続いたはずでしたのに……。<end>
-@女@＊: That peace should continue when this castle is in the sky...<end>
+@女@＊: And the peace would have continued if this castle had still been in [Heaven:Zenithia]...<end>
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//@男@ルドマン「たのみましたぞ！
// 今まで 以上に
// げんじゅうな 見はりを！！<end>
-//note: he's not talking about flora, but the jar
-@男@Ludman: I had counted on you up until now! You must keep a close watch over it!!<end>
+@男@Ludman: I counted on you! To keep a close watch more than anything else until now!<end>
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//@男@ルドマン「何か あったら
@@ -3069,7 +3059,7 @@
//@男@＊「おおっ @主@どの。
// ルドマンさんは さきほどから
// 見はらしの塔で お待ちですぞ！<end>
-@男@＊: Oh, Lord @主@. Mister Ludman went ahead and is waiting in the watch tower!<end>
+@男@＊: Oh, @主@. Ludman went ahead and is waiting in the watch tower!<end>
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//@男@＊「山奥の村の 西にある
@@ -3104,13 +3094,13 @@
//@男@＊「ところで もう
// ルドマンさんには
// 会ったのかい。<end>
-@男@＊: By the way, I see you've already met with Master Ludman.<end>
+@男@＊: By the way, have you met with Ludman already?<end>
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//@男@＊「なんだか このごろ
// ルドマンさんは 顔色が悪くて
// 様子が おかしいのさ。<end>
-@男@＊: I don't know, but this time Master Ludman's face looks awful and he's behaving strangely.<end>
+@男@＊: I don't know, but this time Ludman's face looks awful and he's behaving strangely.<end>
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//@女@＊「ふあーあ……
@@ -3122,13 +3112,13 @@
//@男@＊「ここのところ
// ルドマンさんが
// よく 来るんだよ。<end>
-@男@＊: Master Ludman often drops into the bar these days.<end>
+@男@＊: Ludman often drops into the bar these days.<end>
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//@男@＊「あまり こういう店に
// 顔を見せるような人じゃ
// なかったんだがねえ。<end>
-@男@＊: There aren't many people who show their face in this kind of establishment.<end>
+@男@＊: He's not the kind of man to show his face in this sort of establishment very often, y'know?<end>
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//@男@＊「おや まあっ @主@！
@@ -3186,7 +3176,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1644
//@男@＊「あたしゃ ほれなおしたねえ。<end>
-@男@＊: I'm completely head over heels.<end>
+@男@＊: I'm completely head over heels, y'know?<end>
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//@男@アンディ「…… ……！！！
@@ -3238,7 +3228,7 @@
//@男@アンディ「そうなんです！
// フローラの父 ルドマンさんの
// 様子が 変なんです！<end>
-@男@Andy: Oh, I forgot! Flora's father, Mister Ludman, is acting so very peculiar!<end>
+@男@Andy: Oh, I forgot! Flora's father, Ludman, is acting so very peculiar!<end>
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//@男@アンディ「落ち着きが なくて
@@ -3250,7 +3240,7 @@
//@女@フローラ「お願いです！
// 父も あなたたちになら
// 心を打ちあけるかもしれません。<end>
-@女@Flora: Please! It's possible that you may get my father to open up to you.<end>
+@女@Flora: Please! My father probably might open up to you.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=1650
//@男@アンディ「ボクからも たのみます。<end>
@@ -3260,7 +3250,7 @@
//@男@アンディ「どうか ルドマンさんの
// なやみを 聞いて そして
// 助けに なってやってください！<end>
-@男@Andy: Please, listen to Mister Ludman's plight and extend your hand!<end>
+@男@Andy: Please, listen to Ludman's plight and extend your hand!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=1652
//@男@アンディ「あっ そうだった。
@@ -3300,13 +3290,13 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1658
//@女@スーザン「@主@さんの事は
// 主人から よく 聞いてますわ。<end>
-@女@Susan: I often heard about @主@ from my husband.<end>
+@女@Susan: I often heard about you, @主@, from my husband.<end>
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//@女@スーザン「本当に
// ステキな方ね。
// ……ぽっ。<end>
-@女@Susan: He really is a handsome guy. ...*blush*.<end>
+@女@Susan: You're really a handsome guy, aren't you? ...*blush*.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=165A
//@男@＊「まあっ！ @主@！
@@ -3328,37 +3318,37 @@
//@男@＊「数日前 この町にやって来た
// 旅の商人の 話を聞いてから
// 主人の 様子が変わったの。<end>
-@男@＊: Ever since a traveling merchant came to this town some days ago, the master's appearance changed.<end>
+@男@＊: Ever since a traveling merchant came to this town several days ago, my husband's mood has changed.<end>
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//@男@＊「でも 私には
// 何も話してくれないし……。
// ああ もう心配で……。<end>
-@男@＊: But he won't tell me anything, and... Ah, I'm so worried...<end>
+@男@＊: But he won't tell me anything, and... Oh, I'm so worried...<end>
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//@女@＊「あらっ？
// まあ！ 若だんなさま！
// お帰りなさいまし！<end>
-@女@＊: Huh? Well! Little Master! Welcome back!<end>
+@女@＊: Huh? Well! My young master! Welcome back!<end>
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//@男@＊「数日前 この町にやって来た
// 旅の商人の 話を聞いてから
// 主人の ようすが変わったの。<end>
-@男@＊: Ever since a traveling merchant came to this town some time ago, the master's appearance has changed.<end>
+@男@＊: Ever since a traveling merchant came to this town several days ago, my husband's mood has changed.<end>
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//@女@＊「@主@さま。
// 私…… 聞いてしまったのです。
// ご主人さまの ひとりごとを……。<end>
-@女@＊: Lord @主@. I-I beg you... Why the master is all...<end>
+@女@＊: Lord @主@. I-I beg you... I snuck a peak at his...<end>
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//@女@＊「ツボが 赤く光る時
// いにしえより
// 奴が よみがえる……って。<end>
-@女@＊: When the jar shines a bright crimson, legends say, the antiquity will be resurrected...<end>
+@女@＊: When the jar shines a bright crimson, the legend said, the antiquity will be resurrected...<end>
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//@女@＊「広間の 本だなにある
@@ -3370,67 +3360,67 @@
//@女@＊「@主@さま。
// どうか ご主人さまを
// 助けて さしあげて下さいまし。<end>
-@女@＊: Lord @主@. Please, help the master somehow.<end>
+@女@＊: Lord @主@. Please, help him somehow.<end>
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//@FS18@“わが名は ルドルフ。
// この日記を 代々伝えよ
// けっして なくしては ならぬ！<end>
-@FS18@"My name is Ludluf. Please keep this diary safe, and for your own good, you better not lose it!"<end>
+@FS18@My name is Ludluf. Please keep this diary safe, and for your own good, you better not lose it!<end>
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//“いましがた わたしは
// 巨大な 魔物を ツボの中に
// 封印する事に 成功した。<end>
//note: i succeeded sealing a giant demon inside a jar
-"Mere moments ago, I sealed a giant demon inside a jar."<end>
+Mere moments ago, I sealed a giant demon inside a jar.<end>
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//“奴の体は 雲をつきぬけ
// 天まで とどくほどの
// 巨大さだった。<end>
-"He was a monstrous beast. His body broke through the clouds and scraped [the heavens:Zenithia]."<end>
+He was a monstrous beast. His body broke through the clouds and scraped [the heavens:Zenithia].<end>
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//“ほうっておけば わがサラボナ
// だけでなく 世界中が
// ほろぼされた ことであろう。<end>
-"If left unchecked, he would conquer not only my beloved Sarabona, but the entire world."<end>
+If left unchecked, he would conquer not only my beloved Sarabona, but the entire world.<end>
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//“しかし 残念な事に 封じこめた
// 聖なるツボのちからは １００年……
// 長くても １５０年だろう。<end>
-"However, unfortunately the holy jar that contains him will probably only last 100... or 150 years."<end>
+However, unfortunately the holy jar that contains him will probably only last 100... or 150 years.<end>
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//“ツボが そのちからを うしない
// 赤く 光った その時
// 奴は 再び この世に現れる！<end>
-"If the jar begins to glow red, the seal will soon break and the monster will once again wreck havoc in this world!"<end>
+If the jar begins to glow red, the seal will soon break and the monster will once again wreck havoc in this world!<end>
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//“まだ見ぬ わが子孫よ。
// なにも してやれぬが
// がんばるのだ。<end>
-"To my descendants, whom I will never meet - good luck, no matter what you do."<end>
+To my descendants, whom I will never meet - good luck, no matter what you do.<end>
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//“わたしも この事を のちの世まで
// 伝えるため とりあえず
// 子供だけは 作っておこう。<end>
-"I write this as a warning to my descendants from the other side."<end>
+I write this as a warning to my descendants from the other side.<end>
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//“では 運わるく １５０年目に
// 当たった わが子孫よ
// けんとうを 祈る。 ルドルフより”<end>
-"Well then, to my ill-fated descendant 150 years from now. I pray for your success. -Ludluf"<end>
+Well then, to my ill-fated descendant 150 years from now.<arrow>I pray for your success.<line><line> -Ludluf<end>
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//@FS19@@主@は 日記を
//本だなに もどした！<end>
-@FS19@@主@ returned the journal!<end>
+@FS19@@主@ returned the diary to the bookshelf!<end>
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//@男@ルドマン「なんとっ
@@ -3441,13 +3431,13 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1670
//@男@ルドマン「い いや……
// つもる話は 後にしよう。<end>
-@男@Ludman: N-No... Let's talk about what's happened in the back.<end>
+@男@Ludman: N-No... Let's catch up later.<end>
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//@男@ルドマン「今は
// 私の たのみだけ
// 聞いて もらえないか？<end>
-@男@Ludman: Now won't you just listen to my request?<end>
+@男@Ludman: Now, won't you just listen to my request?<end>
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//@男@ルドマン「町の北にある
@@ -3537,12 +3527,12 @@
//@男@＊「モンスターに まちがわれ
// 私に 斬られても
// もんくは 言えんぞ。<end>
-@男@＊: When monsters come, I kill them. You cannot complain.<end>
+@男@＊: Don't complain even if I mistake you for a monster and were to kill you.<end>
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//@男@リリアン「スピー スピ……。<end>
-//Note: This is some kind of noise-making that I haven't encountered much...I'm taking a stab at it, double-check please.
-@男@*Lilian: Waa Waaa...<end>
+//Note: sleeping dog
+@男@Lilian: *silently sleeping*...<end>
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//@女@＊「いらっしゃーい！
@@ -3575,14 +3565,13 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1688
//@男@＊「おたがい イヤな事があると
// 気がめいりますな。<end>
-//note: fixme: context of this line?
-@男@＊: If something bad happens to us we get depressed.<end>
+@男@＊: I feel depressed with all this bad stuff going on.<end>
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//@男@＊「だからって 光の国に行けば
// 助かる とかいうのも
// うますぎる話 ですしね……。<end>
-@男@＊: That's why it's too sweet a story to be saved if you go to the kingdom of light...<end>
+@男@＊: So that's why, I say, it's too sweet o' a story that you'll be saved if ya go to the Kingdom of Light...<end>
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//@男@＊「ぐがー ぐがー……。<end>
@@ -3591,13 +3580,12 @@
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//@男@＊「うちの人ったら
// こんなに つかれちゃって……。<end>
-//note: fixme: could be 'my family' or 'this family' (wife or servant)
-@男@＊: My family is so very tired...<end>
+@男@＊: My husband is so very tired...<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=168C
//@男@＊「ゆっくり 休ませて
// あげなくっちゃ。<end>
-@男@＊: If I don't let them rest well.<end>
+@男@＊: I must let him get his rest.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=168D
//@男@ルドマン「わっ はっ は。
@@ -3642,24 +3630,24 @@
//@男@＊「反対に 子供から
// ひとつ ひとつ 教えられて
// 本当の親に なっていくのです。<end>
-@男@＊: Conversely, when you learn more little by little from your children, then you'll be a real parent.<end>
+@男@＊: Conversely, we learn from our children, and bit by bit we become true parents.<end>
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//@男@＊「大丈夫。 あなたなら
// きっと 良いお父さんに
// なれますとも。<end>
-@男@＊: It's alright. You'll definitely become a good father.<end>
+@男@＊: It's alright. You'll certainly become a good father.<end>
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//@女@＊「@主@さま
// 助けて いただいて
// ありがとう ございました。<end>
-@女@＊: Lord @主@, thank you very much for rescuing him.<end>
+@女@＊: @主@, thank you so much for coming to Ludman's aid.<end>
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//@女@＊「ルドマンさまの わらい顔
// 本当に 久しぶりで……。<end>
-@女@＊: It really has been a long time since I've seen Master Ludman's smiling face...<end>
+@女@＊: It really has been a long time since I've seen his smiling face...<end>
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//@女@＊「おかげさまで 町の人々も
@@ -3675,13 +3663,13 @@
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//@男@ルドマン「おお フローラも
// そこにおったか！<end>
-@男@Ludman: Oh, Flora is also there!<end>
+@男@Ludman: Oh, are you over there too, Flora?<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=169B
//@男@ルドマン「@主@のような
// すばらしい夫をもって フローラも
// 幸せ者だ。 わっはっは！<end>
-@男@Ludman: With such a fabulous husband as @主@, Flora must also be happy. Wahaha!<end>
+@男@Ludman: With such a fabulous husband as @主@, you're also a lucky one, Flora. Wahaha!<end>
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//@男@＊「あらっ それじゃ
@@ -3692,24 +3680,25 @@
//@男@＊「うれしいけど
// ちょっと ふくざつな気持ちねえ。
// ふふふっ。<end>
-@男@＊: I'm happy, but it's such a complex feeling. Hoo hoo hoo.<end>
+@男@＊: I'm thrilled, but it's a little overwhelming, y'know. Hoo hoo hoo.<end>
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//@男@＊「でも こんな小さな子供たちまで
// たたかわなくちゃ いけないなんて
// かわいそうに……。<end>
-@男@＊: But, having such small children fight is sad...<end>
+@男@＊: But, you musn't let such young children fight. It's makes me sad...<end>
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//@男@＊「そうだわ おこづかいを
// あげましょうね。 これで お父さんに
// なにか 買ってもらいなさい。<end>
-@男@＊: That's right, let me give you your allowance. Buy something nice for your father with this.<end>
+@男@＊: That's right. I'll give you your allowance. Have your father buy you something nice with this.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16A0
//@主@たちは ５０００ゴールドを
//受けとった！<end>
-@主@ received 5,000 Gold!<end>
+//note: fixme: the party
+@主@ receives 5,000 Gold!<end>
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//@男@＊「私が おばあちゃんだなんて
@@ -3721,17 +3710,17 @@
//@女@＊「さすが 若だんなさま ですわ。
// お帰りになったとたん
// あんな怪物を やっつけるなんて。<end>
-@女@＊: That's our Little Master. Just as you return you fight those monsters.<end>
+@女@＊: That's our young master. Just as you come home, you go fight those monsters.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16A3
//@女@＊「若だんなさま
// お帰りなさいませ。<end>
-@女@＊: Welcome back, Little Master.<end>
+@女@＊: Welcome back, my young master.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16A4
//@女@＊「フローラさまも
// お帰りなさいませ。<end>
-@女@＊: Welcome back too, Mistress Flora.<end>
+@女@＊: Welcome back too, Flora.<end>
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//@男@＊「ルドマンさんの 屋敷から
@@ -3764,7 +3753,7 @@
//@男@＊「まさか また 悪いことがおこる
// 前ぶれ じゃないと
// いいんですがね……。<end>
-@男@＊: It'd be nice if it isn't a prophecy of something bad that will occur again...<end>
+@男@＊: It'd be nice if it weren't some omen of something bad that might happen...<end>
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//@男@＊「いやあ。
@@ -3775,12 +3764,12 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=16AC
//@男@＊「なんか 体のでかいやつが
// 歩いているようだったよなあ。<end>
-@男@＊: Some kind of humongous monster was walking around.<end>
+@男@＊: It kinda felt like some gigantic monster was walking around.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16AD
//@男@＊「えっ ルドマンさんが
// 元気に なったって？<end>
-@男@＊: What, Master Ludman is back to normal?<end>
+@男@＊: What, Ludman is back to normal?<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16AE
//@男@＊「そうかあ。
@@ -3791,12 +3780,12 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=16AF
//@男@＊「でも まあ あの人には
// こういう店は 似合わないからねえ。<end>
-@男@＊: But I guess it's for the best. Ludman didn't really fit with this kind of bar, didn't he?<end>
+@男@＊: But I guess it's for the best. This sort of bar doesn't really suit him, does it?<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16B0
//@男@アンディ「そうでしたか。
// １５０年前の 魔物とは……。<end>
-@男@Andy: I see. An ancient 150 year old beast...<end>
+@男@Andy: I see. An ancient 150 year old monster...<end>
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//@男@アンディ「きっと 魔物にとっては
@@ -3808,7 +3797,7 @@
//@男@アンディ「だから ルドルフ
// ひい ひい ひい……。
// コホン！<end>
-@男@Andy: Because, Ludluf... Hya, hya, hya! ...*cough*<end>
+@男@Andy: Because, Ludluf, the great, great, great... Ahem!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16B3
//@男@アンディ「ルドルフおじいさんが
@@ -3841,12 +3830,12 @@
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//@男@＊「ほこらの ツボの中は
// きっと 怪物だったろうな。<end>
-@男@＊: There was definitely a monster inside the shrine's jar.<end>
+@男@＊: There's certainly some sort of monster inside that jar.<end>
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//@男@＊「赤く光っていたなら
// そうに きまってらね。<end>
-@男@＊: When it shone red, that is when it was discovered.<end>
+@男@＊: That's gotta be the case 'cause it's glowing red, right?<end>
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//@女@＊「@主@さま 申しわけありませんが
@@ -3886,7 +3875,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=16C1
//なにやら イヤな気配が
//伝わってくる……。<end>
-It conveys an eerie feeling...<end>
+An eerie feeling crept over @先@...<end>
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//@先@は 静かに青くひかる
@@ -3896,17 +3885,17 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=16C3
//どうやら ルドマンが ふたたび
//封印したらしいが……。<end>
-It seems Ludman has once again sealed, but...<end>
+It looks like Ludman has once again sealed it, but...<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16C4
//@先@は ふるふると
//動いているツボを 調べた！<end>
-@先@ investigates the moving jar!<end>
+@先@ investigated the moving jar!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16C5
//なんと うっかり
//フタを 開けてしまった！<end>
-Wow, you absentmindedly removed the cover!<end>
+Absentmindedly @先@ removed the cover!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16C6
//@女@＊「プイイーッ！
@@ -3917,7 +3906,7 @@
//@女@＊「まったく ルドルフの子孫のやつ
// ナマイキにも わしを
// 封印しおって……。<end>
-@女@＊: I knew it! How dare Ludluf's descendants, having the audacity to seal ME, the great...<end>
+@女@＊: I can't believe that bastard Ludluf's descendant had the audacity to seal ME...<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16C8
//@女@＊「……わっ！
@@ -3936,7 +3925,7 @@
//@女@＊「なんと 用心深いヤツだっ！
// ぬぬ〜っ！ もう もとの身体には
// もどれんではないか！<end>
-@女@＊: That overly cautious, fat bastard! Unnnnngh! Will I never be able to return to my original form?!<end>
+@女@＊: That clever, fat bastard! Unnnnngh! Will I never be able to return to my original form?!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16CB
//@女@＊「ん？ なんだ お前らは？
@@ -3954,12 +3943,12 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=16CD
//@女@＊「よし！ ワシを お前らの仲間
// として 連れて行け！<end>
-@女@＊: Alright! Take me along with you guys!<end>
+@女@＊: Fine! You're going to bring me along as party member!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16CE
//@女@＊「あわよくば 方法を見つけて
// もとの身体に もどったるわい。<end>
-@女@＊: If I'm lucky, maybe I'll find some way to return my magnificent body to its original form.<end>
+@女@＊: If I'm lucky, maybe I'll find some way to return my body to its original form.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16CF
//@女@＊「ワシは プオーンじゃ。
@@ -3968,13 +3957,13 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=16D0
//プオーンが 仲間に くわわった！<end>
-Puon joined!<end>
+Puon joins!<end>
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//@女@＊「なんと 心のせまいヤツじゃ！
// お前らなど いつか
// 封印してくれるわっ！<end>
-@女@＊: What heartless fools you all are! J-Just you wait, I'll seal you guys away 'n see how you like it!<end>
+@女@＊: What a heartless fool! I'll seal YOU away someday!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16D2
//@女@プオーン「ん？ なんだ お前らは？
@@ -4017,30 +4006,30 @@
//@男@ルドマン「おお 来たか！
// ……うん？ なんだ
// @主@が いないではないか！<end>
-@男@Ludman: Oh you've come! ...Yeah? Where has @主@ gone off to?!<end>
+@男@Ludman: Oh you've come! ...Hmm? What. @主@ isn't here, is he!?<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16DA
//@男@ルドマン「ささっ 早く
// @主@を つれて来てくれ！<end>
-@男@Ludman: Now, quickly bring me @主@!<end>
+@男@Ludman: Now, hurry up and bring @主@!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16DB
//@男@ルドマン「@主@
// ごくろうだった。
// そうか…… やはり赤色か。<end>
-@男@Ludman: Well done, @主@. I see... It really is red.<end>
+@男@Ludman: Well done, @主@. I see... It really shone red?<end>
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//@男@ルドマン「その顔を見れば
// うらない師じゃない 私でも
// ツボの色は 当てられるさ。<end>
-@男@Ludman: Looking at that face, a man who's not a doctor like myself can guess the color of the jar.<end>
+@男@Ludman: I don't need to be psychic to guess the color of the jar by looking at your face.<end>
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//@男@ルドマン「もう時間が
// ないようだ。
// さっ こっちへ！<end>
-@男@Ludman: I don't have any more time. Come over here!<end>
+@男@Ludman: I don't have any more time. So, come here!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=16DE
//@男@ルドマン「いいかね @主@。
@@ -4148,7 +4137,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=16F0
//@男@＊「ここは 海辺の修道院。
// 女だけの 祈りの館じゃ。<end>
-@男@＊: This is a seaside abbey. A prayer chapel only for women.<end>
+@男@＊: This is the seaside abbey. A prayer chapel of only women.<end>
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//@男@＊「おや？ お前さまは たしか……。
@@ -4264,12 +4253,12 @@
//@女@＊「ぼく オニごっこの オニで
// いそがしいんだ。
// また あとでね。<end>
-@女@＊: I'm busy as IT in tag. I'll see you afterwards.<end>
+@女@＊: I'm way busy cause I'm IT in tag. Bug me later, 'kay?<end>
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//@女@＊「わっ わっ オニが くるよ！
// ぼくに 話しかけないで！<end>
-@女@＊: Waaa, he's coming! Don't talk to me!<end>
+@女@＊: Wah, Wah, the IT will come! Don't talk to me!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=1706
//@男@＊「え？ あの
@@ -4302,7 +4291,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=170B
//@男@＊「ええい！ いいや！
// いっちまえ！<end>
-@男@＊: Aww, hell! Attack!<end>
+@男@＊: Ahh, hell! Enough o' this! Chaaaarge!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=170C
//@男@＊「うちの人ったら
@@ -4337,13 +4326,13 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1711
//@男@＊「やっと 運命の女性と
// めぐり会えたと 思ったのに……。<end>
-@男@＊: I thought I would go and visit the Maiden of Destiny at last...<end>
+@男@＊: And I had thought that I had finally met the woman of my destiny...<end>
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//@男@＊「なぜ あんなに早く
// 神に 召されたのか……。
// うっうっうっ……。<end>
-@男@＊: Why was I called to God so fast...? *sob*<end>
+@男@＊: Why was I called to the Lord so quickly..? *sob*<end>
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//@男@＊「ぐおー ぐおー。
@@ -4374,36 +4363,36 @@
//@男@占いババ「なんと！ ３つのリングが
// そなたを みちびく というのが
// 出ておる！<end>
-@男@Grandma Oracle: W-hat! It says that the three rings will lead you!<end>
+@男@Grandma Oracle: Oh my! It says that the three rings will lead you!<end>
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//@男@占いババ「１つめは 炎のリング
// ２つめは 水のリング
// ３つめは 命のリング。<end>
-@男@Grandma Oracle: The first is the Fire Ring, the second the Water Ring, and the third the Life Ring.<end>
+@男@Grandma Oracle: The first is the fire ring, the second the water ring, and the third the life ring.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=171A
//@男@占いババ「この３つの リングが合わさる時
// そなたに また別の道が
// しめされるはずじゃ。<end>
-@男@Grandma Oracle: The time when you bring those three rings, I shall tell you more of this path you must take.<end>
+@男@Grandma Oracle: A new path shall be shown to you when you bring those three rings together.<end>
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//@男@占いババ「ちなみに 命のリングは
// とても高い所で 見つけると
// 出ておるぞ。<end>
-@男@Grandma Oracle: By the way, you can find the Ring of Life in a very high place.<end>
+@男@Grandma Oracle: I also see that you will find the life ring in a very high place.<end>
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//@女@イナッツ「妖精の国や 迷いの森の近くには
// かわったモンスターが出るって話よ。<end>
-@女@Inette: There's a story that strange monsters appear near the Lost Forest and the Fairy Kingdom.<end>
+@女@Inette: There's a story that strange monsters will appear near the Lost Forest and the Fairy Kingdom.<end>
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//@女@イナッツ「すごろく場や
// 決まった場所でしか 仲間にならない
// モンスターも いるみたいね。<end>
-@女@Inette: It seems there are also places where some monsters won't readily ally with you.<end>
+@女@Inette: It looks like there are monsters that won't join your party except in specific places and on [sugoroku boards:parcheesi tracks] too.<end>
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//@女@イナッツ「でも そんなモンスターを
@@ -4420,25 +4409,24 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1720
//@女@イナッツ「私が 教えてあげられることは
// もう ないわ。 ウフフ。<end>
-@女@Inette: There is nothing more that I can teach you. Ooh hoo hoo.<end>
+@女@Inette: There is nothing more that I can teach you. T'hee hee.<end>
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//@男@＊「なんと あの男を
// 逃がしてしまうとは……。<end>
-@男@＊: That man has escaped...<end>
+@男@＊: How could you let him escape..?<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=1722
//@男@＊「しかし 闇が この世を
// おおうならば せめて 行きたい所へ
// 行かせてやるべきか……。<end>
-//note: is this the same as the above?
-@男@＊: However, if darkness should spread over this world, it will follow him wherever he goes...<end>
+@男@＊: But, I guess we should at least let him go to where he wants to go if darkness will cover this world..?<end>
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//@低@＊「くそー いったい
// いつになったら ここから
// 出られるんだっ！？<end>
-@低@＊: Shit~ When will I be able to leave this place?!?<end>
+@低@＊: Shit! When will I be able to leave this place?!?<end>
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//@低@＊「おっ ありがてえ！
@@ -4505,7 +4493,7 @@
//@男@＊「あのモンスターが 勝てば
// 超大穴だから なんと
// コインが ４０倍以上にっ！<end>
-@男@＊: Since that's a dark monster, if it wins you'll get over 40 times the coins!<end>
+@男@＊: If that monster wins, then I'll get more than 40 times the number of coins because it's got super high odds!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=1730
//@男@＊「@拡@いけ〜！
@@ -4516,7 +4504,7 @@
//@男@＊「なかなか 当たらないわねえ。
// 中に 誰か 入ってるんじゃ
// ないのかい？<end>
-@男@＊: We weren't really successful. I wonder if there isn't someone inside there?<end>
+@男@＊: The cherries haven't come up at all. Could there be someone inside of it?
#TEXTBLOCK=1732
//@男@＊「やりましたよ！ また 当たりました！！
@@ -4526,7 +4514,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1733
//@女@＊「やっぱり 出ないわねえ……。
// こわれてるのかしら？<end>
-@女@＊: Nothing came out as expected... I wonder if it's broken?<end>
+@女@＊: I knew nothing'd come out... I wonder if it's broken?<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=1734
//@男@＊「おまえさんも ずいぶんと
@@ -4610,7 +4598,7 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1742
//@男@＊「わっはっは！
// あんたも 落ちましたのう！<end>
-@男@＊: Wahaha! you also fell!<end>
+@男@＊: Wahaha! You also fell down!<end>
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//@男@＊「私は かれこれ３０年 ここの
@@ -4621,18 +4609,18 @@
#TEXTBLOCK=1744
//@男@＊「こうして 落ちてくる人を
// 見るのだけが 楽しみでのう。<end>
-@男@＊: Because of that, I just enjoy watching people fail.<end>
+@男@＊: So that's why I just enjoy watching people fall down.<end>
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//@男@＊「うう……。
// ボロ負けだ くっそー！<end>
//note: fixme: ugggh... what a shitty loss?
-@男@＊: Ugh... Sh-ite, I lost!<end>
+@男@＊: Ugh... Sh-it, I lost!<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=1746
//@男@＊「あそこで あいつに カケなきゃ
// こんなことには……。<end>
-@男@＊: I can't put up with that fellow in there...<end>
+@男@＊: That wouldn't have happened if I hadn't put my bet on that guy over there...<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=1747
//@男@＊「夜の町は お好きですか？<end>
@@ -4653,25 +4641,25 @@
//@男@占いババ「ふ〜む。
// お前さんは だれかを
// さがしておるようじゃな。<end>
-@男@Fortune Teller: Hmm, you seem to be searching for someone.<end>
+@男@Grandma Oracle: Hmm. You seem to be searching for someone.<end>
#TEXTBLOCK=174B
//@男@占いババ「それは 長い長い旅になると
// 出ておるぞ……。 お前さんを
// 助けてくれる仲間を ふやすことじゃ。<end>
-@男@Fortune Teller: You'll find it after a long, long journey... There'll be more allies that will help you.<end>
+@男@Grandma Oracle: You'll find it after a long, long journey... There'll be more friends who will lend you their aid.<end>
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//@男@占いババ「う〜む……。
// お前さんが もとめる者は
// この世界には おらんようじゃ。<end>
-@男@Fortune Teller: Hmm, the one you seek is not in this world.<end>
+@男@Grandma Oracle: Hmm, the one you seek is not in this world.<end>
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//@男@占いババ「かつて この世には
// 別の世界への門を 守る人びとが
// 暮らしていたと 聞くがのう。<end>
-@男@Fortune Teller: Awhile ago, I heard that there were people who once lived in this world whose duty was to protect the gate to the Demon World.<end>
+@男@Grandma Oracle: Awhile ago, I heard that there were people who once lived in this world whose duty was to protect the gate to the Demon World.<end>
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//@女@＊「今 私の夫が お風呂に
@@ -4778,13 +4766,13 @@
//@女@フィーネ「この衣装 すごく重いのよ。
// お姫さまとかって よくこんなの
// ずっと 着ていられるわね。<end>
-@女@Feene: These clothes are extremely heavy. Princesses wear these kind of things all the time.<end>
+@女@Feene: These clothes are extremely heavy. Princesses wear these kind of things all the time, y'know?<end>
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//@男@母親「主役を ひき立てるのが
// 私の役目。 そういう演技の方が
// ずっと むずかしいのよ。<end>
-@男@Mother: It is my duty to support the leading actress. That kind of performance is pretty rare.<end>
+@男@Mother: It is my duty to support the leading actress. The actor in that role always has it tough.<end>
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//@女@グレース「旅をしてると いろんな人に
@@ -4937,7 +4925,7 @@
//@男@ゲマ「……そうですか……。
// ここまで チカラを
// つけているわけですね……。<end>
-@男@Gema: ...<arrow>It can't be... You've come so far with such potency...<end>
+@男@Gema: ...I see...<arrow>@男@Gema: You seem to have gotten quite potent up until now...<end>
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//@男@ゲマ「おや？ なにを おどろいて
@@ -4949,7 +4937,7 @@
//@男@ゲマ「ほっほっほっほっ……。
// こんな所で チカラつきるまで
// たたかうほど バカではありません。<end>
-@男@Gema: Ehhehheh... It is the height of foolishness to face me with your abilities in such a location.<end>
+@男@Gema: Ehhehheh... It is the height of foolishness to face me with your abilities in this place.<end>
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//@男@ゲマ「どちらにせよ あの時……
@@ -5057,7 +5045,7 @@
//@男@プサン「ありがとうございます。
// なにやら 全身に チカラが
// みなぎってくるようです。<end>
-@男@Pusan: Thank you very much. Yes, it seems that its power has begun to surge through my entire body.<end>
+@男@Pusan: Thank you very much. It seems that its power has begun to surge through my entire body.<end>
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//プサンは ドラゴンオーブを抱き
@@ -5070,45 +5058,43 @@
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//@男@＊「マ マスタードラゴンさま！<end>
-@男@＊: Lord M-Master Dragon!<end>
+@男@＊: M-Master Dragon!<end>
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//@低@＊「わが名は マスタードラゴン。
// 世界のすべてを
// 統治する者なり……。<end>
-//Note: Trying for a happy medium between NES and DS.
-@低@＊: My name... is Master Dragon. From my domain, I observe all that occurs in the Human World below.<end>
+@低@＊: MY name is... Master Dragon. I am the one who rules over all the world...<end>
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//@低@＊「よくぞ 来たな。
// 伝説の勇者の 血を引きし
// 一族たちよ。<end>
-@低@＊: Those whom the blood of the Legendary Hero courses through your veins, I applaud your courage and determination.<end>
+@低@＊: You have done well. Family whom the blood of the legendary Hero courses through.<end>
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//@低@＊「私が 人として 暮らす間に
// ふたたび 世界の平和が
// やぶられてしまったらしい。<end>
-@低@＊: While I walked the earth as a human, I see peace has once again been denied to your world.<end>
+@低@＊: I see peace has once again been denied to this world in the time that I have been living as a human.<end>
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//@低@＊「魔界の門が 大きく開けられ
// 魔界の王が こちらの世界に
// 来ようとしているのだ。<end>
-@低@＊: The Demon World Gate grows larger, and its diabolical king seeks entry into this realm.<end>
+@低@＊: The gate of the Demon World has grown larger, and the King of the Demon World seeks entry into this one.<end>
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//@低@＊「しかし そなたたちなら
// それを くいとめられるやも
// 知れん！<end>
-//note: he doesn't know? fixme?
-//Note: I'll come back to this.
-@低@＊: However, I also do not know if it will be you who will prevent that from occurring.<end>
+//note: yes, he says 'most likely'
+@低@＊: However! You will most likely be able to prevent that!<end>
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//@低@＊「もちろん 私も
// チカラを かそう！<end>
-@低@＊: All is not lost, for I will certainly lend you my power!<end>
+@低@＊: Of course, I will lend you my power as well!<end>
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//○対象○は 天空のベルを
@@ -5118,7 +5104,7 @@
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//@低@＊「私を 呼びたいときは
// そのベルを 鳴らすがいい。<end>
-@低@＊: When my presence is needed, simply ring this bell.<end>
+@低@＊: When you wish to call me, you should ring that bell.<end>
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//@低@＊「そなたたちの助けが なければ
@@ -5128,7 +5114,7 @@
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//@低@＊「礼を言うぞ！ @主@！<end>
-@低@＊: You deserve my deepest thanks, @主@!<end>
+@低@＊: You deserve my thanks! @主@!<end>
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//@男@＊「プサンが マスタードラゴンの
@@ -5160,7 +5146,7 @@
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//@男@＊「いよいよ たたかいの時が
// やって来たようじゃな！<end>
-@男@＊: Finally the time of the battle has come!<end>
+@男@＊: It seems that the time to fight is upon us at last!<end>
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//@女@＊「やはり マスタードラゴンは
@@ -5172,19 +5158,19 @@
//@女@＊「もとのお姿にもどるため……
// この城にもどるため…… さぞかし
// ご苦労を なされたことでしょう……。<end>
-@女@＊: In order to restore himself... In order to return this castle... surely it must have been so laborious...<end>
+@女@＊: In order to restore himself... In order to return this castle... surely it must have been laborious...<end>
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//@男@＊「マスタードラゴンならば
// どんなに高い山も
// こえられるでしょう。<end>
-@男@＊: With Master Dragon, we can surely scale to the peak the tallest mountains.<end>
+@男@＊: With Master Dragon, you will surely be able to scale mountains no matter how tall.<end>
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//@男@＊「セントベレス山の 山頂に
// 邪悪なる神殿が 完成したと
// 聞きます。<end>
-@男@＊: I heard that the meddling temple on Mount Saint Veles has been completed.<end>
+@男@＊: I heard that troublesome temple on the mountain of Mount Saint Veles has been completed.<end>
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//@男@＊「どうか お急ぎください！<end>
@@ -5194,18 +5180,18 @@
//@男@プサン「そうですか……。
// 本当なら ウデずくでも
// もらうのですが……<end>
-@男@Pusan: I see... If that's true then I would even have to use brute force, but...<end>
+@男@Pusan: I see... If that's true, then I would take it by force, but...<end>
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//@男@プサン「私は 見ての通りの
// やさ男。 あなたがたに
// とても 勝てそうに ありません。<end>
-@男@Pusan: I am not the man I appear to be. You do not have a chance to win at all.<end>
+@男@Pusan: I am not the man that you see before you. You would not stand a chance to win.<end>
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//@男@プサン「オーブは あきらめることに
// しましょう……。<end>
-@男@Pusan: Give the orb up...<end>
+@男@Pusan: So you should give the orb up...<end>
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//@男@＊「ここにあるのは 伝説の勇者が
@@ -5334,13 +5320,13 @@
//@女@＊「この母とともに あなたも
// 大教祖イブールさまに おつかえすると
// 約束してくれますね？<end>
-@女@＊: Will promise your mother that you will renounce the throne and serve only Lord Ibuul?<end>
+@女@＊: Will you promise to serve our dear leader, Lord Ibuul, together with this mother of yours?<end>
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//@女@＊「おお！ それでこそ わが息子！
// イブールさまも きっと
// およろこびに なるでしょう！<end>
-@女@＊: Wonderful! That's my son! I'm sure Lord Ibuul will also be SO thrilled!<end>
+@女@＊: Oh! That's my son! I'm sure Lord Ibuul will also be thrilled!<end>
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//@女@＊「さあ！ イブールさまに
@@ -5368,7 +5354,7 @@
//@低@＊「わっはっはっはっ！
// かかったな！ お前の母など
// すでに この世界には おらぬわ！<end>
-@低@＊: Wahahaha! I'VE DONE IT! As for your pitiful mother, she is already not of this world!<end>
+@低@＊: Wahahaha! I'VE DONE IT! As for your mother, she is already not of this world!<end>
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//@低@＊「オレさまは イブールさまに
@@ -5379,6 +5365,7 @@
//@低@ラマダ「ここにいる人間どものように
// お前たちの たましいも
// ぬきとってくれるわっ！<end>
+//note: i'll swallow your soul! lady you got real ugly
@低@Ramada: I will steal your souls, just as I have claimed the souls of the other cretins here!<end>
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@@ -5585,12 +5572,12 @@
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//“マリア……
// 兄さんは もう だめだ……<end>
-"Maria... Your brother is now done for..."<end>
+Maria... Your brother is now done for...<end>
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//“せめて…… せめて おまえだけは
// しあわせに なってくれ……。”<end>
-"If my only... If my only... wish would just be for you to able to have a happy..."<end>
+It was just my only... my only... my only... wish to let you live in bliss...<end>
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//@低@イブール「ほほう。 ここまで
