Talk:1000 ~ 13FF
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--- 1000.txt 2009-07-02 08:18:38.000000000 -0400 +++ 1000.txt 2009-07-01 17:12:21.000000000 -0400 @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ // なんと こんなに お酒を！<end> //note: could be "I drank".. not sure of context. //NOTE: pretty sure he's talkin about Ojiron (see above and below) -@男@＊: Zzz Zzz... I can't believe how much he drank...<end> +@男@＊: Zzz Zzz... I can't believe how much I drank...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1015 //@男@＊「さすが 大臣さま ですな！ @@ -211,13 +211,13 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=102A //@男@サンチョ「そして なんとしても // 王妃さまを @妻@さまを！<end> -@男@Sancho: And no matter what, rescue Queen @妻@!<end> +@男@Sancho: And no matter what, we'll rescue the queen, @妻@!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=102B //@男@サンチョ「坊っちゃん！ // このサンチョの目は // だませませんぞ！<end> -@男@Sancho: Little Master! I, Sancho, will not let my eyes be fooled!<end> +@男@Sancho: Little Master! You cannot pull the wool over my eyes!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=102C //---ジャンプ---> #011382へ<end> @@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ //@男@オジロン「すると 城の者たちが // 眠りこけた頃 怪物どもが // やってきたと 申すのだな？<end> -@男@Ojiron: You're saying that when everyone was sleeping, monsters sneaked into the castle?<end> +@男@Ojiron: You're saying while everyone was asleep, monsters came into the castle?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=102E //@男@＊「はい。 でも @妻@さまは @@ -248,9 +248,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=1031 //@男@兵士「何者かが 祝賀の酒の中に // 眠り薬でも 入れたのかも……。<end> -//note: shall we call celebratory drink champagne? -//Note: I'm fine with "shampagin" or ale, but potion seems to fit the setting more than pills. -@男@Soldier: It's possible someone slipped a sleeping potion into the ale...<end> +@男@Soldier: It's possible someone slipped a sleeping potion into our celebratory champagne...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1032 //@男@オジロン「そういえば @@ -276,7 +274,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=1036 //@男@オジロン「@主@王…… // 心中 おさっし申すぞ。<end> -@男@Ojiron: Your Majesty... Please, follow your heart.<end> +@男@Ojiron: Your Majesty... You must be worried.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1037 //@男@オジロン「とにかく いっこくも早く @@ -300,7 +298,7 @@ //@男@サンチョ「生まれたばかりの // お子たちも いるのです。 // どうか… どうか……<end> -@男@Sancho: For the sake of your newborn babies at least. Somehow... there must...<end> +@男@Sancho: You have newly-born children as well. Please... Please...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=103B //@男@サンチョ「こ これは…… @@ -312,12 +310,12 @@ //@男@サンチョ「どういうことでしょう… // この剣で… いや この剣が // 城を守るというのでしょうか？<end> -@男@Sancho: What sort of thing... With this sword... Can we really protect the castle with this sword?<end> +@男@Sancho: What do you mean... With this sword... No, are you saying this sword will protect the castle?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=103D //@男@サンチョ「……ともかく この剣は // 大事に おあずかりしておきます。<end> -@男@Sancho: ...Anyway, take care of this sword.<end> +@男@Sancho: ...Anyway, I will take care of this sword.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=103E //@男@サンチョ「どうか 坊っちゃん @@ -341,7 +339,7 @@ //@男@オジロン「わしは いったい // どうしたら いいのか……。 // オロオロオロ……。<end> -@男@Ojiron: What should I do? I... I just don't know.<end> +@男@Ojiron: Just what should I do..?<arrow>@男@Ojiron looks flustered...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1042 //@男@＊「あっ！ 王さま！ @@ -371,7 +369,7 @@ //@男@＊「わっ！ 王さま！ // 今のは 失言でした。 // どうか お許しを。 あわわ……。<end> -@男@＊: Wah! Your Highness! Please have it in your heart to forgive the things I've said. Ahhhh...<end> +@男@＊: Wah! Your Highness! What I just said now was rude. Please give me your forgiveness. Oh no...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1047 //@女@＊「パパス王のときは @@ -428,7 +426,7 @@ //@男@＊「たとえ 姫さまでなくなっても // 少しは 女らしく // していただかないと……。<end> -@男@＊: Even if she stops being a princess, for example, if she doesn't start acting slightly like a lady...<end> +@男@＊: Even though she's not a princess, she should at least ask more lady-like...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1052 //@女@ドリス「誰も 信じちゃくれないけどさ。<end> @@ -488,18 +486,18 @@ //@男@パピン「じつは その // モンスターチェスのコマは // 大臣から いただきまして……。<end> -@男@Poppin: Truthfully, I received that Monster Chess set from the Chancellor...<end> +@男@Poppin: In truth, I received that monster chess set from the Chancellor, and...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=105D //@男@パピン「なんでも お城の宝物庫に // 封印してあったとか。<end> -@男@Poppin: And it had the mark of the castle's treasure room.<end> +@男@Poppin: It should have been sealed in the castle's treasure room.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=105E //@男@パピン「これで チェスをやると // だれもが 夢中になって 仕事など // 手につかなくなるのです……。<end> -@男@Poppin: With that, anyone would fall into a dream when playing chess, and wouldn't do their duty...<end> +@男@Poppin: And that's how when we would play chess, anyone would fall into a dream,<arrow>@男@Poppin: and would become distracted from their duties...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=105F //@男@パピン「われわれが チェスなどで @@ -511,12 +509,12 @@ //@男@パピン「この モンスターチェスは // 王さまに お返しします。 // 申し訳ありませんっ。 ううっ……。<end> -@男@Poppin: I'll return the Monster Chess Set to Your Majesty. I'm s-sorry. *sob*<end> +@男@Poppin: I'll return the monster chess set to Your Majesty. I'm s-sorry. *sob*<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1061 //○対象○は モンスターチェスを //手に入れた！<end> -○対象○ received the Monster Chess Set!<end> +○対象○ received the monster chess set!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1062 //@男@＊「王さま！ @@ -558,7 +556,7 @@ //@女@＊「しかし @主@さまが // 王族のかた だったなんて // びっくりですわ。<end> -@女@＊: But, @主@. To think you are royalty, I was surprised.<end> +@女@＊: But I was shocked that Your Majesty was a member of the royal family.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=106A //@男@＊「今 多くの兵士たちが @@ -681,7 +679,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=107F //@男@＊「@主@王 大丈夫です！<end> -@男@＊: I'm doing alright, Your Majesty!<end> +@男@＊: It'll be alright, Your Majesty!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1080 //@男@＊「マーサさまも @妻@さまも @@ -712,7 +710,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=1086 //@男@＊「ここの教会に 古くから伝わる // ふしぎなインク……。<end> -@男@＊: Mysterious ink that was said to be in this church from long ago...<end> +@男@＊: A mysterious ink that's said to be in this church from long ago...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1087 //@男@＊「それも のこりわずか というので @@ -736,7 +734,7 @@ //@女@＊「気のせいでしょうか？ // その中に 人の姿も // 見えたような……。<end> -@女@＊: Am I crazy? It seems that you can also see human figures inside.<end> +@女@＊: Perhaps I was seeing things? I thought I could see a person amongst them.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=108B //@男@＊「お前さん どこから来たかは @@ -752,10 +750,12 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=108D //@先@たちの 体力が 回復した！<end> +//note: the party @先@'s strength was replenished!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=108E //@先@の 体力が 回復した！<end> +//note: the party @先@'s strength was replenished!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=108F @@ -828,7 +828,7 @@ //@低@＊「うわさでは この塔には // すごい お宝があるって // 話だからな。<end> -@低@＊: Because, there's stories of an INCREDIBLE treasure in this tower.<end> +@低@＊: 'Cause there's a story of an INCREDIBLE treasure in this tower.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=109C //@低@＊「おい 大丈夫かい？ @@ -845,12 +845,13 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=109E //@男@＊「この塔に あやしいヤツが // 潜入したようだ。<end> -@男@＊: Some suspicious people are sneaking about this tower.<end> +@男@＊: It seems that some ornery individuals have entered this tower.<end> +Some suspicious people are sneaking about this tower.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=109F //@男@＊「ん？ お前はっ！ // この あやしいヤツめ！<end> -@男@＊: Huh? You-You spy!<end> +@男@＊: Hm? You are! You're those ornery ones!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=10A0 //レバーが あります。 @@ -876,7 +877,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=10A4 //なんと 岩は //ばくだんいわだった！<end> -The boulder exploded!<end> +The boulder was a rockbomb!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=10A5 //@先@は カベを 見た。<end> @@ -942,7 +943,7 @@ //@女@ビアンカ「まあ！ @主@…… // 私のために 危ない目に // あったのね……！<end> -@女@Bianca: Hey! @主@... You don’t know what you’ve gotten yourself into all ‘cause of me..!<end> +@女@Bianca: Oh my! @主@... You've gotten yourself into danger 'cause of me..!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=10B2 //ビアンカは 世界樹の葉を @@ -1173,12 +1174,12 @@ //@男@ゲマ「ほっほっほっほっ。 // まさか あなたが // 勇者の子孫だったとは……。<end> -@男@Gema: Ehhehheh! No, you couldn't be the descendant of the legendary hero...<end> +@男@Gema: E'heeheehee! Don't tell me you're a descendant of the hero...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=10E0 //@女@@妻@「………… 私が…… // 勇者の子孫？<end> -@女@@妻@: ...<arrow>@女@@妻@: I... am the legendary hero's descendant?<end> +@女@@妻@: ...<arrow>@女@@妻@: I am... a descendant of the hero?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=10E1 //@男@ゲマ「ミルドラースさまの 予言では @@ -1196,12 +1197,12 @@ //@男@ゲマ「どうやら その子供…… // 伝説の勇者は お前の血筋により // これから 生まれてくるのでしょう。<end> -@男@Gema: How can THAT child... the legendary hero be born from YOUR filthy bloodline?<end> +@男@Gema: But it seems your child... will be born from your bloodline as the legendary hero.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=10E4 //@男@ゲマ「しかし それだけは // させるわけには いきません。<end> -@男@Gema: No matter, I will not allow this to happen.<end> +@男@Gema: However, I will not allow that to happen.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=10E5 //@主@と @妻@は @@ -1358,13 +1359,13 @@ //@男@＊「おや ビアンカちゃん。 // あんたが 幸せそうで // あたしも うれしいよ。<end> -@男@＊: Hey, Bianca. If you're looking happy, then I am also happy.<end> +@男@＊: Hey Bianca. You are in bliss, and that makes me happy too.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1102 //@男@＊「父さんのことは // 心配いらないから しっかり // だんなさんに ついてお行き。<end> -@男@＊: Not to worry your father you'd better get a grip.<end> +@男@＊: You needn't worry about your father so go with your husband.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1103 //@女@ビアンカ「おばさん ありがとう。 @@ -1433,7 +1434,7 @@ //@女@ビアンカ「もうっ！ // なにを 言ってるのよ // おじいさんったら。 いやあね。<end> -@女@Bianca: Aw, EWWW! What the heck’re you sayin’ you ol’ sod? No way!<end> +@女@Bianca: Eww! What the heck're you sayin'? Ol' man. No way!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=110F //@男@＊「ん？ ビ ビアンカちゃん！ @@ -1487,7 +1488,7 @@ //@男@＊「よう あんたが ウワサの // サラボナのおじょうさんかい。 // だんなさんに よろしくな。<end> -@男@＊: Whoa, you're the rumored lady of Sarabona. Say hello to your father for me.<end> +@男@＊: Whoa. You're the rumored young lady of Sarabona? Give my regards to your husband.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1119 //@男@ダンカン「ゴホン ゴホン！ @@ -1546,7 +1547,7 @@ //@男@ダンカン「ビアンカに 用なら // となりの部屋に いるから // 声を かけておくれ。<end> -@男@Duncan: If you're interested in talking to Bianca, then I'll go tell her since she's in the next room.<end> +@男@Duncan: If you've got business with Bianca, then I'll call for her since she's in the next room.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1124 //@男@デール「え？ もう手に入れた？ @@ -1557,7 +1558,7 @@ //@男@デール「あなたなら きっと // 伝説の勇者を // 見つけられますよ。<end> -@男@Dale: I know that you will certainly be able to find the Legendary Hero.<end> +@男@Dale: I know that you will certainly be able to find the legendary hero.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1126 //@男@ヘンリー「@主@じゃないか！ @@ -1575,26 +1576,25 @@ //@男@ヘンリー「これで 人生の // パートナーも できたことだし // いよいよ 勇者を探す旅か……。<end> -@男@Henry: Now you've found your partner in life, and you can travel to find the hero...<end> +@男@Henry: Nnd now that you've found your partner for life, you'll travel to search for the hero at last..?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1129 //@男@ヘンリー「オレも 一緒に // 行きたいところだけど // マリアがいるしな。<end> -@男@Henry: I also have a place I want to go, but Maria is with me.<end> +@男@Henry: I also want to go with you, but Maria is here with me.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=112A //@男@ヘンリー「まあ たまには // 遊びに来てくれよ。 // お城の暮らしは 退屈でさっ。<end> -@男@Henry: Well, thanks for coming to play around. Castle life is pretty boring.<end> +@男@Henry: Well, thanks for swinging by. Castle life is fairly boring.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=112B //@男@ヘンリー「ところで お前 // まだ 記念オルゴールを // 持って行ってなかったよな。<end> -//note: fixme: Hmm, asking or telling, need to test -@男@Henry: By the way, are you still carrying the music box?<end> +@男@Henry: By the way, you're still carrying the music box, aren't you?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=112C //@男@ヘンリー「そんなこと言って @@ -1615,7 +1615,7 @@ //@女@マリア「私は 楽しく聞いていますけど // 男の人って いつになっても // 旅が 好きなんですね。<end> -@女@Maria: I listen with enjoyment, but men are always interested in travel.<end> +@女@Maria: I enjoy listening to him, but men always like going on about their travels.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1130 //@男@＊「まいっちゃったなあ……。 @@ -1722,7 +1722,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=1142 //@女@ビアンカ「いじわる。 // でも 行っちゃおうっと。<end> -@女@Bianca: Aw, don’t be cruel. Fft, I’m tellin’ you anyway.<end> +@女@Bianca: Aw, you're cruel. But I'm comin' over anyway.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1143 //---ジャンプ---> #012387へ<end> @@ -1767,7 +1767,7 @@ //@女@ビアンカ「お久しぶりです！ // シスター。 今は @主@と // ２人で 旅をしてるんです。<end> -@女@Bianca: Long time no see, Miss Sis! I'm travelin’ together with @主@ these days.<end> +@女@Bianca: Long time no see, sister! I'm travelin’ together with @主@ these days.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=114B //@女@＊「そうだったの……。 それなら @@ -1860,7 +1860,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=115B //@男@＊「わたしに くださいますよね？<end> -@男@＊: You're giving this to me?<end> +@男@＊: You're going to give it to me, right?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=115C //@男@＊「おお！ ありがとうございます！ @@ -1881,7 +1881,7 @@ //@男@＊「こんな場所にいると なおさら // 外の世界を感じさせる この // 砂でできたバラが いとおしいです。<end> -@男@＊: When I'm in this kind of place the rose that's made out of sand that lets me feel the outside world is sweet.<end> +@男@＊: Being in this sort of place, this rose made out of sand, that gives me a taste of the outside world, is precious.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1160 //@男@＊「それは 残念です。 @@ -1899,17 +1899,17 @@ //@男@＊「カジノ船は こんなに // 近くにあるのに いつも // ながめてばかりなんです。<end> -@男@＊: With the Casino Ship this close, I am always just looking at it.<end> +@男@＊: I'm so close to the Casino Ship and yet I'm always just looking at it.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1163 //@男@＊「でも ボクだって // お金さえ ためれば……。<end> -@男@＊: But, if I even had the money...<end> +@男@＊: But, if I only had the money...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1164 //@男@＊「カジノ室は 今ごろ // 盛り上がってるんだろうね～。<end> -@男@＊: The casino room is at its priiime now.<end> +@男@＊: The casino room is at its prime now.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1165 //@男@＊「カジノ船に 行かれる方は @@ -1951,13 +1951,13 @@ //@男@＊「カジノで遊ぶのに // ５０００ゴールド ぽっち // ケチるなんて……。<end> -@男@＊: The casino requires 5,000 gold fer a spin...<end> +@男@＊: So stingy about 5,000 gold and yet you're enjoying a casino...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=116C //@男@＊「しょうがないなあ もう……。 // 他の 金持ち客に 笑われないよう // 気をつけろよっ。<end> -@男@＊: Guess ya don't need anyfin'... Watch yer back so the rich blokes don't laugh in yer face.<end> +@男@＊: Well so be it already... Just ya watch yer back when the other rich blokes laugh in your face.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=116D //@女@＊「カジノ船で はたらくのが @@ -1987,7 +1987,7 @@ //@男@＊「ゆれてる船の中で // スロットをやって みなさん // 目が回らないんでしょうか？<end> -@男@＊: In a rocking boat people will play the slots, and will they look around at all?<end> +@男@＊: Won't everyone get dizzy playing the slots on a ship that rocks back and forth?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1173 //@男@＊「私は ルドマン様に やとわれ @@ -2042,7 +2042,7 @@ //@男@＊「ねえさんになら // ５０００ゴールドで // 教えてやるぜ？<end> -@男@＊: Won't you let me teach you for a mere 5,000 gold just for you?<end> +@男@＊: For you girl, I'll teach you for a mere 5,000 gold?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=117D //@男@＊「ん～。 @@ -2064,7 +2064,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=1180 //@男@＊「うちのダンナは 何であんなに // カジノが 好きなんだろうね。<end> -@男@＊: Why does my master like the casino that much?<end> +@男@＊: Just why does my husband like casinos so much?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1181 //@男@＊「やっちゃダメ とは @@ -2075,7 +2075,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=1182 //@男@＊「勝つときは 勝つし // 負けるときは 負ける。<end> -@男@＊: You win when you win and lose when you lose.<end> +@男@＊: You win when you win, and lose when you lose.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1183 //@男@＊「のんびり いきましょう……。<end> @@ -2085,7 +2085,7 @@ //@男@＊「以前は ちがう船に 乗っていたが // ルドマン様から ここの船長に // なれと くどかれてね。<end> -@男@＊: Before I rode on a different ship, but Sir Ludman made me this ship's captain.<end> +@男@＊: I commanded a different ship before, but Ludman made me this ship's captain.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1185 //@男@＊「最初は ことわったんだが @@ -2162,7 +2162,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=1192 //@男@＊「それでは ごゆっくり // お休みくださいませ。<end> -@男@＊: Well then please enjoy your stay.<end> +@男@＊: Well then, please enjoy your stay.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1193 //@男@＊「おはようございます。 @@ -2246,22 +2246,22 @@ //@男@＊「いてて……。 // いや～ あの踊りは // はげしいですね。<end> -@男@＊: Owww... Nooo that dance is violent isn't it.<end> +@男@＊: Owww... Well, that dance is pretty violent, ain't it?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11A2 //@男@＊「身を 乗り出して // 見ていたら // けとばされてしまいました。<end> -@男@＊: If you go up and take a look you'll be kicked away.<end> +@男@＊: I got kicked away when I leaned over to take a closer look at their figures.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11A3 //@男@＊「いいぞ～！ そこだ～！<end> -@男@＊: It's good~! There~!<end> +@男@＊: It's so nice! Right there!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11A4 //@男@＊「ラインダンスは ふり上げる足が // たまりませんね～。<end> -@男@＊: Raising your legs over your head in line dancing is frustrating.<end> +@男@＊: Dancing in a line, kicking up their legs over their heads, is simply irresistible.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11A5 //@男@＊「ここのオーナーの ルドマンさんは @@ -2289,7 +2289,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=11A9 //@男@＊「いったい 何をやったら // そんなに もうかるのか……。<end> -@男@＊: Just what are you doing to be so profitable..?<end> +@男@＊: Just what the heck did they do to make so much money..?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11AA //@男@＊「このような ところって @@ -2317,7 +2317,7 @@ //@男@＊「長年 こういう仕事をしていると // さわっただけで 何のカードか // 分かるんですよ。<end> -@男@＊: I've been doing this job for many years so I just know which card is which.<end> +@男@＊: Doing this job for many years I know which card is which just by touching them.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11AF //@男@＊「…… いえ いえ @@ -2394,7 +2394,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=11BC //@男@＊「しょせん 遊びと // あなどれないのだ。<end> -@男@＊: After-all, he doesn't despise play.<end> +@男@＊: After all, you can't show disdain if you're the one playing.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11BD //@男@＊「考えに 考えなければ @@ -2410,20 +2410,19 @@ //@男@＊「あそこで 船が 大きく // ゆれなかったら サイコロの目も // そのままだったのに……。<end> -@男@＊: If the ship rocks a lot in the other direction, the dice will land right where I need it...<end> +@男@＊: If the ship hadn't rocked so violently over there, then the die roll would have been just what I needed..<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11C0 //@男@＊「うぬぬ……。 // いくら 金があっても すごろく券が // なければ 遊べんとは。<end> -//note: fixme: onomonotopeia FIXME -@男@＊: Unnn... No matter how much money you have you can't play without a [Sugoroku:Parcheesi] ticket.<end> +@男@＊: Ugh... No matter how much money you have, you can't play without a [sugoroku:parcheesi] ticket.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11C1 //@女@＊「カジノとか すごろくって // あまり 頭を // 使わない方が いいのよね。<end> -@女@＊: It's nice to have people who don't use their heads really well at the casino or at the [Sugoroku:Parcheesi] Board.<end> +@女@＊: You shouldn't let the Casino or playing [Sugoroku:Parcheesi] mess with your head, y'know.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11C2 //@男@＊「ここは 船倉だ。 @@ -2439,19 +2438,19 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=11C4 //@男@＊「足りない荷物が ないか // 確認 確認っと。<end> -@男@＊: Please confirm that the passenger doesn't have any bags.<end> +@男@＊: Do you have any luggage that isn't yours? Gotta check. Gotta make sure.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11C5 //@男@＊「しかし まあ // カジノで遊ぶのに こんな荷物が // 必要なのかね～。<end> -@男@＊: However does he really need such luggage to play at the casino?<end> +@男@＊: But, well, is all this luggage really necessary to enjoy the casino?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11C6 //@男@＊「いいえ！ 自分は // サボって カジノで遊んだことは // ありません！<end> -@男@＊: No! There's no reason to be lazy yourself, and not have played at the casino!<end> +@男@＊: No! I've never skipped out of work myself and played at the casino!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11C7 //@男@＊「むにゃ むにゃ……。<end> @@ -2477,7 +2476,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=11CB //@男@＊「あの時は 大変だったけど // いい結婚式だったな～。<end> -@男@＊: That was a troublesome time but it was a good wedding~.<end> +@男@＊: It was pretty troublesome that time, but it was such a nice wedding.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11CC //@男@＊「って…… ありゃ！ @@ -2551,7 +2550,8 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=11D8 //@男@＊「今は カジノ室も // 静かな大人の時間さ。<end> -@男@＊: Now the casino floor is also the time of quiet adults.<end> +//note: fixme: seems pretty awkward +@男@＊: Now, the casino floor is also for the time of quiet adults.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11D9 //@男@＊「こっくり… こっくり… @@ -2609,23 +2609,23 @@ //@男@＊「ここで 勝負に出なければ // 男の恥…… // んご～ ……。<end> -@男@＊: If I couldn't play here... a man's soul... Zzz...<end> +@男@＊: When I play a round here...<arrow>@男@＊: A man's soul...<arrow>@男@＊: Zzz...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11E4 //@男@＊「スロットの やりすぎで // 人が 絵柄に 見えます。<end> -@男@＊: You can see people's pattern if they play too much slots.<end> +@男@＊: I see people as the pictures on the slots because I've played too much.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11E5 //@男@＊「ああ～ // 踊ると よけいに～！<end> -@男@＊: Ahh, the dancing is too muuuch!<end> +@男@＊: Ahh! I can't bear it when they dance!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11E6 //@男@＊「いや～ // もうかった！ もうかった！ // 笑いが 止まらんな～！<end> -@男@＊: Ohhh~ I'm profitable! I'm profitable! I can't stop laughing!<end> +@男@＊: Ohhh~ I made it big! I made it big! I can't stop laughing!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11E7 //@女@＊「カジノで 集中したぶん @@ -2684,7 +2684,7 @@ //@男@＊「この ムードの中 // さすがに イカサマする人は // いませんね。<end> -@男@＊: This mood, it's definitely a mood where cheaters are not around.<end> +@男@＊: With such an atmosphere, there are no cheaters around.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11F2 //@男@＊「夜になると 帰って行く人も @@ -2702,13 +2702,13 @@ //@男@＊「美しい 歌声……。 // カジノって このような // 楽しみ方も あるんですのね。<end> -@男@＊: A beautiful singing voice... The casino has these kinds of entertainers too.<end> +@男@＊: A beautiful voice... Casinos sure have all sorts of entertainers, don't they?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11F5 //@男@＊「長年 こういう仕事をしていると // カードを 消したりも // できるんですよ。<end> -@男@＊: I can make cards disappear too because I've been working this job for so long.<end> +@男@＊: After working this job for many years, I can also make the cards disappear.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11F6 //@男@＊「いえ…… じょうだんです。<end> @@ -2717,12 +2717,12 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=11F7 //@男@＊「やはり 神の力に // たよりすぎては いけません！<end> -@男@＊: You really shouldn't depend on blind faith!<end> +@男@＊: I really mustn't overuse the Lord's power!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11F8 //@男@＊「自分の力で なんとかしないと。 // 次こそ ダブルアップを……。<end> -@男@＊: If you don't do things on your own. I'll double up next time...<end> +@男@＊: I've got to do things on my own. Next time I'll double-up...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=11F9 //@男@＊「へえ お客さん @@ -2756,7 +2756,7 @@ //@男@＊「それが 手にはいるなら // いくら 払っても // おしくないのだが……。<end> -@男@＊: If I could get my hands on that, I wonder how much I could sell it for, but...<end> +@男@＊: What I wouldn't pay to get my hands on that, but...end> #TEXTBLOCK=11FF //@男@＊「もし この船が 沈んだら @@ -2800,7 +2800,7 @@ //@女@ビアンカ「水門ね……。 // @主@が 元気だったら // 開けて 上流に向かうんだけど……。<end> -@女@Bianca: The Watergate..? I’ll unlock it so you can head upstream if @主@ needs me to...<end> +@女@Bianca: The watergate, right..? If I can see how @主@'s doing, then I'll open it, and you can go up string.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1207 //@低@兄「さあさあ @@ -2942,7 +2942,7 @@ //@FS04@@主@王 ばんざい！ //グランバニア国あげての まつりが //その夜 おそくまで ひらかれ……<end> -@FS04@Long Live King @主@! A festival given by Granvania went long into that night...<end> +@FS04@Long live King @主@! A festival thrown in Granvania went long into that night...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1222 //@男@＊「おはようございます。 @@ -2999,12 +2999,12 @@ //@男@＊「サンチョどのは @主@王を // パパス王のような 危険な目に // あわせたくなかったんですね。<end> -@男@＊: Sancho did not want King @主@ to be in a dangerous situation like he was in.<end> +@男@＊: Sancho didn't want to see Your Majesty in the same dangerous fate as that of King Papas.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=122C //@男@＊「どうか @主@王 // 無理だけは なさらずに……。<end> -@男@＊: Please, King @主@, just don't exert yourself...<end> +@男@＊: Please, Your Majesty, don't just behave rashly...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=122D //@男@＊「さあ この パパス王の @@ -3213,7 +3213,8 @@ //@男@＊「天空には すでに城はなく そこに // 住んでいた 竜の神さまも いずこへか // 姿を 消してしまったということです。<end> -@男@＊: There is no castle in [Heaven:Zenithia], and Master Dragon who lived there also vanished without a trace.<end> +//note: don't replace with heaven:zenithia +@男@＊: There is no castle in the heavens, and Master Dragon who was living there, has also vanished without a trace.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1253 //@男@＊「もし再び 天空の城を @@ -3277,7 +3278,7 @@ // うるさく言われなくて // すむけどね。<end> //note: scolded is probably better because she's said to act un-princess-like -@女@Doris: Eh, least back then, I didn't get scolded.<end> +@女@Doris: But, at least back then, I wasn't scolded as much.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=125E //@男@＊「@主@王が いないあいだに @@ -3295,7 +3296,7 @@ //@男@＊「本当なら @主@王を助けて // いっしょに 旅に出たいところ // ですが……<end> -@男@＊: If he had I would have set out with him to rescue you, but...<end> +@男@＊: if he had, then I would have set out with him to rescue you, but...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1261 //@男@＊「残った兵士たちや 私たちでは @@ -3431,13 +3432,13 @@ //@男@ピピン「あとは 王を助けて いっしょに // 旅に出られたら どんなに // うれしいでしょうか！<end> -@男@Pippin: You don't know how happy I'd be if I could travel together with you after your return!<end> +@男@Pippin: Now, do you know how happy I'd be if I were able to set out on a journey together to help out the king?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1279 //@男@ピピン「旅の お供をさせていただいて // @主@王の 戦いぶりには // 本当に 感動しました！<end> -@男@Pippin: Sire, I was SO moved by your VASTLY superior fighting skills while we were traveling!<end> +@男@Pippin: I'm really impressed by your fighting style after traveling alongside you, Sire!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=127A //@男@ピピン「こんな私で よかったら @@ -3461,7 +3462,7 @@ //@男@ピピン「なんでも お城の名工の細工に // よるもので 昔の大臣が // 持ち込んだとか。<end> -@男@Pippin: According to the castle's old artisan, the Chancellor first introduced everyone to this game.<end> +@男@Pippin: They say the old Chancellor introduced it because it was a finally crafted piece of our castle's famous artisan.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=127E //@男@ピピン「父の遺言によると このコマは @@ -3525,7 +3526,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=1289 //@男@＊「あの子 言ったんですよ。<end> -@男@＊: That kid said it.<end> +@男@＊: He told me.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=128A //@男@＊「母さん 平和な時代は @@ -3556,14 +3557,13 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=128F //@男@＊「ふがふが……。<end> //note: breathing heavily through nose and mouth without saying anything -@男@＊: *breathes heavily*.<end> +@男@＊: *pants*...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1290 //@男@＊「わしが生きとるうちに // 平和な時代が やってくるかのう。 // ふがふが……。<end> -//note: fixme onomonotopeia -@男@＊: I wish a peaceful era would come while I am alive. ....<end> +@男@＊: I wish a peaceful era would come while I am alive. *pants*...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1291 //@男@＊「そして ２人を助け出したとき @@ -3644,12 +3644,12 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=129F //@男@＊「夜おそくまで 本当に // おつかれさまで ございます。<end> -@男@＊: Continuing till late at night, you've worked well.<end> +@男@＊: You've really had a full day staying up so late.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=12A0 //@男@＊「今夜は もう お休みに // なられますか？<end> -@男@＊: Will you be calling this a night?<end> +@男@＊: Will you be calling it a night?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=12A1 //@男@＊「では お休みなさいませ。<end> @@ -3710,12 +3710,12 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=12AB //@女@@娘@「お父さんが 言うなら // わたし お留守番 してます。<end> -@女@@娘@: If Father tells me to, then I will stay behind.<end> +@女@@娘@: If you tell me so, father, then I'll stay behind.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=12AC //@女@@娘@「でも 本当は わたしも // 連れてって ほしかったな。<end> -@女@@娘@: But really, I wanted you to take me with you.<end> +@女@@娘@: But I had really wanted you to take me with you too.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=12AD //@男@＊「あっ だんなさま @@ -4230,12 +4230,12 @@ //@男@＊「ボクも それを取りに来たんだけど // 昼間は 日差しが強いのに // ぼうしを 忘れてきちゃったよ。<end> -@男@＊: I also came to take that, but I lost my hat and the sun is strong during the day.<end> +@男@＊: I also came to pick one of those up, but I completely forgot a hat with it being so hot during the day.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=130F //@男@＊「あ～ ボクって 昔から // ダメなんだよなあ。<end> -@男@＊: Awww, I've never been any good.<end> +@男@＊: *sigh* I, I've always been no good since forever.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1310 //@女@＊「それでね その勇者さまが @@ -4258,14 +4258,14 @@ //@女@＊「女王さまの 予言のとおり // 闇が 世界を // おおい始めたようです……。<end> -//Note: After this, Cho'Nuff refers to "The Darkness," not like Rick James did, but as a group Papas fought. I fought the urge not to make reference to the band. -@女@＊: It looks like The Darkness has started to grip the world, just as the Queen prophesized...<end> +//note: let's not use "The Darkness" as a proper noun +@女@＊: Just as the Queen prophesied, darkness has begun to grip the world...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1314 //@女@＊「しかし 女王さまは // 勇者さまの再来が 近いとも // 予言されたのです！<end> -@女@＊: However, the Queen also prophesized that the hero will return!<end> +@女@＊: However, the Queen also foretold that the hero will return!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1315 //@男@＊「きれいな お花を見れば @@ -4471,18 +4471,18 @@ //@低@＊「ちくしょー！ // もう どこへも やんねえぞ！<end> //note: Chikushou is a commonly known swear, but i guess blue blistering barnacles would work too -@低@＊: Fuck! She ain't headin' off nowhere no mo'!<end> +@低@＊: 'Uck her! I dun care where she goes no mo'!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=133C //@男@＊「ボクも それを取りに来たんだけど // こんなに 冷えこむのに // 薄手のシャツしか 着るものがないよ。<end> -@男@＊: I also came to take that, but in this kind of cold I don't have anything other than this thin shirt.<end> +@男@＊: I also came to pick one of those up, but I don't have anything to wear but this thin shirt with it being so cold out.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=133D //@男@＊「伝説の勇者さまが // とうとう 現れたそうです！<end> -@男@＊: I heard that the Legendary Hero has appeared!<end> +@男@＊: I heard that the legendary hero has appeared!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=133E //@男@＊「うーん ぜひとも @@ -4492,7 +4492,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=133F //@男@＊「ああ！ 伝説の勇者さま！ // 待っていて 良かった……。<end> -@男@＊: Ah! The Legendary Hero! I've waited so long...<end> +@男@＊: Ah! The legendary hero! I've waited so long...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1340 //@男@＊「勇者@子@さま！ @@ -4546,7 +4546,7 @@ //@男@＊「天空の血をひく 勇者さまの家系は // とだえていなかったと // いうわけですな……。<end> -@男@＊: That means that the blood of [Heaven:Zenithia] carried within the hero's descendants hasn't been diluted...<end> +@男@＊: That means that the blood of [Heaven:Zenithia] carried by the hero's descendants hasn't been cut off...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1349 //@男@＊「これで 世界も 救われると @@ -4566,19 +4566,19 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=134C //@男@＊「勇者っていっても まだ // 小さな子供 なんだって？<end> -@男@＊: Even though it's said you're the hero, you're still a child?<end> +@男@＊: Even though you're the hero, you're still just a child, right?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=134D //@男@＊「そういえば あちこちで 子供が // さらわれたって話を 聞いたことが // あるけど…… まさかねえ。<end> -@男@＊: Speaking of which, there are stories of children being abducted here and there, but... It couldn't be true.<end> +@男@＊: Speaking of which, I've heard stories that children have been abducted here and there, but... I can't believe it.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=134E //@女@＊「ねえ 知ってる？ // 勇者さまが とうとう // 現れたんですって！<end> -@女@＊: Hey do you know? The hero has appeared!<end> +@女@＊: Hey, do you know? The hero has finally appeared!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=134F //@女@＊「それでね その勇者さまって @@ -4605,13 +4605,13 @@ //@男@＊「うーむ……。 もう // 伝説のカブトを お守りする必要が // なくなって しまったぞ。<end> -@男@＊: Hmm, there is no longer a need to protect the legendary helm.<end> +@男@＊: Hmm... It is no longer necessary to protect the legendary helm.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1354 //@男@＊「いや！ まだ 私たちには // テルパドールの民を 守るという // 使命が あるのだった！<end> -@男@＊: No! We have yet the duty to protect the people of Telpador!<end> +@男@＊: No! I still have the duty to protect the people of Talpador!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1355 //@男@＊「@拡@オリャー！ @@ -4731,7 +4731,7 @@ // 世界の道理を 知りたくて // この村に 来たのなら……<end> //Note: Here's the real truth. It's good to be the king. -@男@＊: If the true history of the world is what you seek, you came to the proper village...<end> +@男@＊: If you want to learn truth in this world, then you came to the right village...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=136B //@男@＊「われらエルヘブンの @@ -4824,13 +4824,13 @@ // まほうのじゅうたんと // カギを さずけよう！<end> //Note: Great, but he's talking about two seperate items. -@男@＊: If so, I'll teach you about magic keys and carpets!<end> +@男@＊: Then, I'll teach you about the magic carpet and key!<end> #TEXTBLOCK=137B //@男@＊「ふたつとも この村にあるので // さがして // 持ってゆくがよい。<end> -@男@＊: Since they're both in this village, it'd be best to find them and bring them along.<end> +@男@＊: Please search for and take them because they're both in this village.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=137C //@男@＊「そなたが マーサどのを @@ -4863,13 +4863,13 @@ //@男@＊「ここで お待ちしていれば // マーサ王妃と 共に お帰りになる…… // そんな気がして ならないのだよ。<end> -@男@＊: If I were to wait here, he'd come back with Queen Martha... Even if I believe that, it won't happen.<end> +@男@＊: If I were to wait here, then he will return together with Queen Martha... I won't give up that hope.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1382 //@男@＊「ここで お待ちしていれば // マーサ王妃と 共に お帰りになる…… // そんな気がして ならないのです。<end> -@男@＊: If I were to wait here, he'd come back with Queen Martha... Even if I think that, it won't happen.<end> +@男@＊: If I were to wait here, then he will return together with Queen Martha.... I won't give up that hope.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1383 //@男@＊「……うん？ それは サンタローズの @@ -4885,7 +4885,7 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=1385 //@男@＊「その 聖なる原石を 私に // 加工してほしいのですかな？<end> -@男@＊: I wonder if you want me to craft something with that holy gem?<end> +@男@＊: I wonder if you want me to shape that holy ore?<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1386 //@男@＊「ふむ……。 パパス王の息子の @@ -4897,7 +4897,7 @@ //@男@＊「しかし 聖なる原石を加工して // はめこむ物を 持ってきていない // ようですな。<end> -@男@＊: However you haven't brought the container that I need to craft the Holy Ore with.<end> +@男@＊: However you haven't brought the container that I need to craft the holy ore with.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1388 //@男@＊「用意ができたら また @@ -4963,14 +4963,13 @@ //@男@＊「今は亡き このエルヘブンの画家も // 当時は 王の味方をして 長老たちの // いかりを買ったとか……。<end> -//note: fixme: is the speaker the painter? -@男@＊: The late El Haven painter that was also his ally back then, and earned the wrath of the elders...<end> +@男@＊: The late El Haven painter became his ally back then, and earned the wrath of the elders...<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1393 //@男@＊「よくぞ 来ました。 // 大いなる マーサの子 @主@と // その仲間たちよ。<end> -@男@＊: Thanks for coming. @主@, son of the great Martha, and his companions.<end> +@男@＊: Thanks for coming. @主@, son of the great Martha, and your companions.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=1394 //@男@＊「そなたの来ることは @@ -5078,19 +5077,18 @@ #TEXTBLOCK=13A6 //@女@＊「マーサさまは いつも // おっしゃっていました。<end> -@女@＊: Martha was always honest.<end> +@女@＊: Like Martha had always told me.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13A7 //@女@＊「心に 光をともしていれば // 決して 闇にのまれることはないと。<end> -//note: spark a light don't sound right but reverse if it was correct -@女@＊: If you choose to light a spark in your heart, you will never be consumed by darkness.<end> +@女@＊: If you keep light in your heart, you will never be consumed by darkness.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13A8 //@女@＊「あなたがたの お役に立つか // わかりませんが この本を // お持ちください。<end> -@女@＊: I don't know if it'll be any use, but please, take this book.<end> +@女@＊: I don't know if it'll be of any use to you, but please take this book.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13A9 //@先@は 美しいししゅうが @@ -5106,8 +5104,7 @@ //@女@＊「エルヘブンの民が 子供の頃から // 読んでいる 神の言葉の書ですわ。 // どうか ご加護がありますよう……。<end> -//note: fixme: incomplete sentence 3rd line -@女@＊: It's a book with God's words that the children of El Haven read. Somehow it may bless your...<end> +@女@＊: It's a book of God's words that the people of El Haven read since their childhood. May it somehow bless you.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13AC //@男@＊「よくぞ まいられた @@ -5164,7 +5161,7 @@ //@男@＊「ここの教会の 神父さまが 書く // 神さまの言葉の書は いろんな // 教会に くばられているんだよ。<end> -@男@＊: The book of God's words that this church's priest wrote has been sent to various other churches.<end> +@男@＊: The book of God's words that the priest of this church wrote, has been sent to various other churches.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13B6 //@男@＊「なにしろ 特別なインクで @@ -5228,12 +5225,12 @@ //@女@＊「だいぶ昔のことですが // グランバニアから たくさんの // 兵士が やって来ました。<end> -@女@＊: This is a pretty old thing, but a lot of soldiers have come from Granvania.<end> +@女@＊: This is pretty old news, but many soldiers came from Granvania.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13C1 //@女@＊「なんでも 行方不明になった // 王さまを さがしているとかで。<end> -@女@＊: They are desperately looking for their King who disappeared.<end> +@女@＊: They were desperately looking for their King who disappeared.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13C2 //@女@＊「見つかっていれば @@ -5267,13 +5264,13 @@ //@男@＊「あなたの お連れの方 // お子さんが いるわりには // お若いですなあ。<end> -@男@＊: The children that are traveling with you are pretty young, aren't they?<end> +@男@＊: You look awfully young to be traveling with children that age.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13C8 //@男@＊「おや？ あなた // お子さんが いるわりには // お若いですなあ。<end> -@男@＊: Eh? The children that are traveling with you are pretty young, aren't they?<end> +@男@＊: Oh? You seem pretty young to have had children.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13C9 //@男@＊「しかし わたしの妻も @@ -5296,7 +5293,7 @@ //@女@＊「愛する夫を もつ女は // ずっと 若いままで // いられるものですわ。<end> -@女@＊: Women, who have a man that loves them, can be young forever.<end> +@女@＊: A woman who has a husband that loves her will stay young forever.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13CD //@女@＊「まあ あなた。 おうちに @@ -5394,7 +5391,7 @@ //@男@＊「ここだけの話ですが // 光の教団の 大神官は // 女の人らしいですよ。<end> -@男@＊: This is between us, but the Goddess of the Followers of Light is a woman.<end> +@男@＊: This is just between us, but I hear that the Goddess of the Followers of Light is a woman.<end> #TEXTBLOCK=13DF //@男@＊「え？ 教団を知らない？
