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//夜も おそいせいか
//内側から カギが かかっている。<end>
Perhaps because it only comes at night, and all the doors are locked from the inside.<end>
//weird. is there a speaker? or is this an observation? like when you read signs and stuff.
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//@男@＊「あんたも うまい商売を
// 考えたもんずらよっ。<end>
@男@＊: Ya'll sure came up with a good racket for yourselves.<end>
@男@＊: Y'all sure came up with a good racket for yourselves.<end>
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//@男@＊「サラボナの町の フローラさんが
// ６年ぶりに 修道院から
// 帰ってきたそうじゃ。<end>
@男@＊: Miss Flora just returned home to Sarabona after spending the past six years at an abbey.<end>
@男@＊: Miss Flora just returned home to Sarabona after spending the past six years at our abbey.<end>
//only make this change if it's the escorting nun speaking.
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//@男@＊「でも どうして こうなったん
// だろうなあ……。
// やっぱり はじめが肝心だったな。<end>
//note: fixme: 3rd line
//Was - But why did it come about this way..? Really the first step was essential.
@ 男@＊: I don't know how things ended up like this.<arrow>@男@＊: It all depends on what kind of a start your marriage get off to, I suppose...<end>
@男@＊: I don't know how things ended up like this.<arrow>@男@＊: It all depends on what kind of a start your marriage gets off to, I suppose...<end>
// *** Uh, the same?
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//○対象○は シルクのヴェールを
//受けとった！<end>
○対象○＊: Took the silk veil!<end>
//i don't think this is a speaking line but a ...um...getting-item line
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//○対象○は 不思議な木の実を
//受けとった！<end>
○対象○＊: Took the Mysterious Tree Seed!<end>
//is this a speaking line or a getting-item line? and what's the Mysterious Tree Seed?
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//@男@＊「だったら その
// 天空の 武器 防具とやらを
// 集めておくんですね。<end>
@男@＊: Here’s a thought, you should try collecting this so-called [Heavenly:Zenithian] Armor and sword.<end>
@男@＊: Here’s a thought, you should try collecting this so-called [Heavenly:Zenithian] Armor and Sword.<end>
OR
@男@＊: Here’s a thought, you should try collecting this so-called [Heavenly:Zenithian] armor and sword.<end>
//there was another block like this one...can't remember which number.
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//@男@＊「おお！ ビ ビアンカちゃん！
// 温泉に 入りに来たのかえ！？
// ふが ふが……。<end>
@男@＊: Ohhoho! Bi-Bianca! Have you come to take a bath, you dirty girl!? Heheh...<end>
@男@＊: Ohhoho! B-Bianca! Have you come to take a bath, you dirty girl!? Heheh...<end>
OR
@男@＊: Ohhoho! Bi-anca! Have you come to take a bath, you dirty girl!? Heheh...<end>
//not sure if he's stuttering or cat-calling.
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//@男@＊「……ん？ ビ ビアンカちゃん！
// ふが ふが……。<end>
@男@＊: ...Huh? Bi-Bianca! Hubba Hubba...<end>
@男@＊: ...Huh? B-Bianca! Hubba Hubba...<end>
OR
@男@＊: ...Huh? Bi-anca! Hubba Hubba...<end>
//again, stuttering or cat-calling?
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